1. 体裁解读
申请信是在求职或留学时常用的一种信件。申请信应该简洁明了,如实地反映你的才能、成绩、愿望和目标。一封英文申请信必须表明写信的目的,原因以及对自身情况的介绍。申请信的语气要诚挚、友好,在表达自己的愿望时应礼貌而自信。
2. 写作攻略
申请信要求一事一议,内容单纯。其内容一般包括:申请的具体内容;自己的情况和条件;提出要求,如请求回信、面试等。申请信的书写可以遵照以下步骤:
第一步:点名写信目的,说明信息来源,并陈述自己能胜任; 第二步:介绍自己,具体说明能胜任的原因; 第三步:表达期望,请求尽快答复并给予机会。 我们以【2018年浙江省舟山市】中考书面表达为例:
假设你是李华。上周六,你陪同来自美国结对学校的中学生Peter体验中国文化。请根据以下信息,用英语写一篇短文向校刊English Journey投稿,介绍本次活动内容并分享感受。 Activities ◆make zongzi ◆visit a tea museum ◆learn Chinese characters
注意:(1)短文必须包括表格中的所有内容,并表达感受。 (2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数:80-100。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
短文首句:Last Saturday, I took Peter, a student from America, to experience some Chinese cultures.
【答案】Last Saturday, I took Peter, a student from America, to experience some Chine cultures. Everything he experienced that day is a great attraction to him.
In the morning, Peter and I went to visit a tea museum, where he learnt a lot about Chinese tea. After that, I took him home and taught him to make zongzi. Although it was a bit difficult,
… Feelings he still enjoyed it. In the afternoon, we had a Chinese class, learning the history of Chinese characters. He also tried to write some characters with a Chinese brush, and even lost himself in it.
Peter kept saying “Amazing!” all the way, which makes me really proud of our rich cultures.
写作模板
Dear __________,
I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of ______________(工作、职位等). / I write to express my interest in ______________
点明写信目的
(工作、职位等). / In reply to your advertisement in ______________ (地),I write the letter.
My name is ______________. One of my reasons for applying is that ______________ (原因一). The other reason is that ______________ (原因二). Besides, ______________(原因三).
I hope you will be kind enough to consider my application. Best regards for your health and success.
Sincerely yours, ________(落款)
【模板范文】 Dear Chairman,
I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of joining the Chinese and western cultural exchange club.
My name is Li Hua and I'm 15. One of my reasons for applying is that I like English and I am interested in western culture. The other reason is that I hope to make some friends in the club. Communicating with people is my strength. Besides, I also want to know more
介绍自己,说明能胜任的原因
表达期望
about the difference between Chinese and western culture.
I hope you will be kind enough to consider my application. Best regards for your health and success.
亮点词汇搭配 1. 表示优点和能力 imagination n. 想象力 honest adj. 诚实的
interesting adj. 有趣的 major in... 主修……
hard-working adj. 勤奋的,努力的 have a good command of 掌握,精通 2. 表示期望
answer n. & v. 回应,答复 offer v. 提供 chance n. 机会
look forward to期待
3. 其他
advertisement n. 广告 especially adv. 尤其
reply n. & v. 回复,回应 poster n. 海报 activity n. 活动
post/position n. 职位
in one's spare time 在某人业余时间经典句子背诵:
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
creativity 创造力 strength n. 长处,优点 be good at 擅长
suitable adj. 适合的
consider v. 考虑
opportunity n. 机会
join v. 加入 application n. 申请
possibility n. 可能性 interview n. 面试 convenience n. 方便 interest n. 兴趣 favorite adj. 最喜爱的
volunteer n. 志愿者
开头句
1. I write to express my interest in... 我写信是为了表达我对……的兴趣。
2. In reply to your advertisement in..., I write the letter. 我写这封信是为了回应您在……广告。
3. I am writing to tell you that I am suitable for the job yare advertising. 我写信是告诉您我符合您招聘广告中的要求。
4. I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of... 我写这封信是想询问一下能否…… 中间句
1. I learned from the newspaper that your company needed a part-time English secretary. 我从报纸上看到您的公司需要一名兼职英语秘书。 2. I have a good command of... 我……掌握得很好。 3. In my spare time, I read a lot. 我在闲暇时经常读书。
4. Being good at playing with children, I can do my best to help the kids. 我非常擅长和孩子一起玩,我会尽我最大的努力帮助他们。
5. In my opinion, volunteer work is great because it can help many people. 我认为志愿者的工作很伟大,因为它可以帮助很多人。
6. I think the job can not only help me improve my English, but also help me know more about the society.
我认为这份工作不仅能帮我提高英语水平,而且能帮助我更好地了解社会。 结尾句
1. I hope you will be kind enough to consider my application. 希望您能考虑我的申请。
2. I shall be much grateful if you will offer me an opportunity to an interview. 如果您能给我提供一个面试机会,我将不胜感激。
3. Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you. 感谢您考虑我的申请,期待得到您的回复。
4. I hope you'll let me join your volunteer group. 我希望您能准许我加入您的志愿者团队。
5. I'm looking forward to your reply. 期待您的回复。
(一)【2019 •吉林】
假如你是李华,想参加China Daily 举办的以”梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr. Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。内容包括:1.个人信息与兴趣爱好2.梦想职业与个人计划
写作要求;1.词数90词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。 Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you. _______________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply. Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文属于申请信,给主办人史密斯先生写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件,包含个人信息与兴趣爱好和梦想职业与个人计划。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。 【参考范文】 Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you.
My name is Li Hua.I like reading and writing.I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school.And I have a habit of keeping a dairy.I want to be a writer when I grow up.So After knowing your summer camp,I feel very excited because it's about dream job experience.If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job,I will cherish this chance.After work,I will spend more time making a summary.
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如like doing, spend+时间+doing sth, keep a diary, grow up以及If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job,I will cherish this chance中if引导的条件句用一般现在时,主句用一般将来时,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
(二)【2019 •宁夏回族自治区】
第四届“丝绸之路”宁夏国际马拉松赛将于2020年5月举行。假定你叫李华,你想成为本届马拉松赛的一名志愿者。请用英语给组委会写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.个人优势:擅长英语,性格开朗,做事认真,爱好运动。(至少再补充两点) 2.个人承诺:尽力提供优质服务。 注意:
1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数); 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:volunteer志愿者 Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I'm very glad that the 4h\"Silk Road” International Marathon will be
held
in
Ningxia
in
May
,
2020.
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly.
Li Hua
【参考范文】 Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua.I'm very glad that the 4h \"Silk Road\" International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May,2020.I'd like to be a volunteer.
I'm a girl of 15,a middle school student.First of all,I do well in English.【高分句型一】I'm outgoing.I take everything seriously.Besides,I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before.【高分句型二】What's more,I'm always ready to help others and good at working with people.(个人优势)I promise I'll try to offer my best service during the race.I will be very happy if I can be chosen as a volunteer.(个人承诺)
I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours truly, Li Hua 【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
First of all,I do well in English.首先,我的英语很好. First of all首先
do well in在……某方面干得好 【高分句型二】
Besides,I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before.此外,我对体育感兴趣,我曾经是一名志愿者.
be interested in 对…有兴趣
(三)【2019 •浙江省台州市】
似如你是李华,一个英国游学团要来你们学校,学校需要一些志愿者,你想成为其中的一员。请读下面的招募启事,写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Some students from the UK will come to our school to have a study tour. They are interested in Chinese culture. We’ re looking for some volunteers to help us.
Can you introduce yourself(English ability and personality)?
Can you plan an activity about Chinese culture and explain your purpose? If you are interested, please email us at Andrew@l63. com. 注意:(1)请回复招募启事中所提及的两个问题, 可适当发挥; (2)应征邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息; (3)词数:80~100;
(4)邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Andrew,
I’m
Li
Hua.
________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I'm a 17-year-old girl from Class 3, Grade 2. I would like to become a volunteer for the American students.(点明目的)My English is good and I can talk with foreigner fluently. In addition, I'm interested in sports, which is why I'm in good health.【高分句型一】When my friends get in trouble, I often help them actively. I'm good at taking up with others. Besides I like travelling a lot and I'm quite familiar with our city.(自我介绍)I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture so that British friends can understand China better.【高分句型二】(计划的活动)
I'm sure I can become friends with the English students. Looking forward to your answers.(愿望)
Yours, Li Hua
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
In addition,I'm interested in sports,which is why I'm in good health.此外,我对体育感兴趣,这就是为什么我健康状况良好.
which引导非限制性定语从句. 【高分句型二】
I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture, so that British friends can understand China better.我计划组织一次关于中国传统文化的活动,让英国朋友更好的了解中国.
plan to do sth计划做某事;so that 引导目的状语从句
Writing 1
假设你是第一中学的高三学生李华,你们城市将在下月举办运动会,招募中学生志原者。请根据以下内容要点,用英语给该组织负责人写一封申请信。
内容要点:1. 介绍个人情况; 2.个人优势; 3.表达期望。 注意:1.词数:100左右;
2.书信格式已经给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours, Li Hua
【参考范文】 Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua,a student from No. I Middle School. I'm writing to recommend myself as a volunteer of our city sports meeting to be held next month. Here come my advantages.
To begin with, I love sports and playing spots has been an important part of my life. What's more, I am friendly and patient, so I can get along well with others easily. More importantly, I consider it a good chance to serve our society and develop my ability. I would be very grateful if you could give me a chance.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
Writing 2
假定你是李华,是一名高二学生。最近,你校广播站向全体学生招募两名英语播音员。你很想尝试一下,请根据下面的要点写一封自荐信。
1. 自我介绍和写信的目的; 2. 自身优势; 3. 希望被录取。 注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好。 Dear Sir or Madam,
I
am
Li
Hua
,
a
student
in
Class
1
,
Grade
2.
_______________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours, Li Hua
【参考范文】 Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua,a student in Class 1,Grade 2. I have read the notice that our school radio needs two English announcers,therefore,I am writing to volunteer to serve as one.
First of all,I am greatly interested in broadcasting,I have received some professional training in my spare time,hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future. Now I would like to put what I have learned into practice and gain some experience,Besides,I am good at English,especially spoken English. I won first prize in the English Speech Contest last year. So I think I am highly qualified for the job. If I were admitted,I would spare no effort to serve the students.
I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance to work for the school radio station I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Hua
Writing 3
假定你是李华,从互联网((the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括:1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家); 3. 希望获准。 注意:1. 数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours, Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.
I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours, Li Hua
Writing 4
假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一些优秀学生,利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示,用英语给校评选组写一封申请信:
1. 对此活动的认识(如对本人、学生及社会的益处等) 2. 个人优势(如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等) 3. 你的计划(如怎样进行辅导等) 注意:1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯; 3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。 参考词汇:晨曦希望小学Chenxi Hope School Dear Sir or Madam,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours, Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Chen Xi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutor, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.
I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach, because I have good character, being independent in life and proficient in English. That’s why I apply for the position; I hope I can join the instructive activity.
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. I hope you can offer the opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 5
某国际学校要招募一批志愿者(volunteer),担任来自英美等国中学生的陪伴(buddy)。假如你叫李明,请给这个国际学校该项目的负责人写一封邮件,申请结对一位小伙伴。
要点提示:1. 自我介绍(性格,特长等);
2. 申请理由(帮助他人,提高自己等); 3. …… 要求:1. 词数80左右;
2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路分析】
这是一篇给材料作文。某国际学校征募志愿者(volunteer)担任来自英美等国中学生的陪伴(buddy)。写作时要紧紧围绕要点提示,进行自我介绍,特别是申请理由一定要写充分。根据内容可知主要用一般现在时态来完成。 【参考范文】 Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Ming, a student in Class 1, Grade 3. I’m 16 years old. I want to be a volunteer to play with the students from England and America as a buddy. I think I’m old enough to have some social service so that I can gain more experience. I am an outgoing and friendly boy. English is my favorite at school and I can express myself well in English. Being healthy and active, I’m glad to help others. I hope to improve myself by volunteering and giving help to people.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Liu Ming
【写作亮点】
这篇短文内容切题,意思连贯。层次分明:首先介绍自己的性格特点,然后介绍自己的长处,及爱好以说明自己为什么可以做志愿者。特别是文中的几个句子:I think I’m old enough to have
some social service so that I can gain more experience. English is my favorite at school and I can express myself well in English. Being healthy and active, I’m glad to help others. 把申请理由写的非常到位。
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