初中英语作文题目及范文解读
1．书面表达
请写一篇60﹣70词左右的短文，描述一对好朋友Tina和Tara的异同．并将答案写在答题卡对应的横线上． 内容要点包括：
1．你可以从相貌、体型、性格、兴趣爱好、学习态度等方面来描述． 2．至少写出Tina和Tara的三个相同点和三个不同点． 【分析】高分句型：
For example，they are both beautiful and they both like reading books and playing games．例如，他们都很漂亮，他们都喜欢读书和玩游戏．这里like doing sth表示喜欢做某事． What's more，they both work hard at school．而且，他们俩在学校学习都很努力．这里What's more表示而且，at school表示在学校．
【解答】Tina and Gina are good friends．（引出话题）They have a lot in common．For example，they are both beautiful and they both like reading books and playing games（高分句型）．What's more，they both work hard at school．（高分句型）（她们的相同点）There are also differences between them．Tina is tall and thin，but Gina is short and a little fat．Tina likes cartoons best，but Gina's favorite movies are comedies．（她们的不同点）
【点评】此为提示性作文．要仔细审题，抓住重点，把所给信息条理清楚的表达出来，要求语句通顺；语法，时态正确；书写规范．
2．在一次英语沙龙活动中，外籍教师Ellen与大家一起畅谈人生理想．他让大家把自己的设想写下来保留着，看10年后有多少人能实现自己的理想．请根据表格中的提示或结合你的实际情况完成下面这一片段．
My future life
Job Place to live in Others
a （an） teacher，reporter，artist…
Shanghai，Paris… travel…，keep…as a pet …
When I grow up，I want to be a （an） teacher ．And I think Shanghai sounds like an interesting city，so I'd love to live there．And one day in the future，I am going to travel around the world，and I will also keep a pet ．I am sure my future isn't a dream! 【分析】【高分句型一】
When I grow up，I want to be a teacher当我长大的时候我想成为一名老师． when引导的时间状语从句 【高分句型二】
I am sure my future isn't a dream!我确信我的未来不是梦． be sure that宾语从句，确信…
【解答】When I grow up，I want to be a teacher．【高分句型一】（工作）And I think
Shanghai sounds like an interesting city，so I'd love to live there．（城市）And one day in the future，I am going to travel around the world，and I will also keep a pet．I am sure my future isn't a dream!（其他）
【点评】提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．
3．从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作．文中已给出内容不计入总词数．所给提示词语仅供选用．请不要写出你的校名和姓名． 题目①
假如你是李华，在交换生Peter 的帮助下，你们社团成功地举办了学校的英语才艺展示活动（English Show）．请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，简述感谢他的原因以及你从他身上学到了什么．
提示词语： activity， design， advice， creative， helpful， patience 提示问题：●What did Peter do to help？ ●What have you learned from him？ Dear Peter，
I'm writing to thank you for your great help． ． Thank you again for everything you have done for us．
Yours， Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
It's no surprise that students were crazy about the talk show．学生们对这个脱口秀节目非常着迷，这并不奇怪．
It's no surprise that…不足为奇． 【高分句型二】
Also， you offered valuable suggestions about the opening part of the show， which were quite helpful．
另外，你对节目的开头提出了很有价值的建议，非常有帮助． which引导非限定性定语从句． 【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm writing to thank you for your great help．（写信目的）
You helped us design many amazing activities for the English Show， such as the talk show and the drama． It's no surprise that students were crazy about the talk show． 【高分句型一】Also， you offered valuable suggestions about the opening part of the show， which were quite helpful．【高分句型二】 Thanks to your creative ideas， the show was a great
success．（Peter帮助做了什么）
What's more， I have learned a lot while working with you on the show， especially the importance of listening to team members and sharing ideas with them． You were always willing to share your thoughts， and at the same time， listen to different voices． This helped us work more effectively together．（我学到了什么）
Thank you again for everything you have done for us．（再次感谢）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
4．同学们，学校第8期英文板报开始征文啦！本期征文的题目是\"My colorful Life after School\"．请你写一篇不少于40词的征文，介绍你多彩的课余生活，内容包括：课余时间你通常做什么，以及为什么你认为自己的课余生活是丰富多彩的．所给图片及提示词语仅供选用． 提示问题：，
? What do you usually do after school？
? Why do you think your after﹣school life is colorful？
A Colorful Life after School
______________________________________________________． 【分析】高分句型一
After﹣school life is very important to us middle school students．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语be important to sb \"对某人来说很重要\"，此句可翻译为\"课外生活对我们中学生来说是很重要的．\" 高分句型二
I will try harder to make my after﹣school life more colorful and meaningful．此句是一般将来时的陈述句．运用短语try harder to do sth \"更努力做某事\"，短语make…+adj\"是…怎么样
\"，此句可翻译为\"我将更努力使我的课余生活更加丰富多彩和有意义．\" 【解答】My colorful Life after School
After﹣school life is very important to us middle school students．（高分句型一） A colorful after﹣school life means a lot to me．（要点一，说明课余生活是重要的，丰富多彩的．） I usually read books and listen to music after school on weekdays．And I sometimes play basketball with my classmates．I like the feeling of working as a team．On weekends，I either go to the theater with my friends or take a walk in the park with my parents．（要点二，在课余时间我说做的事情．） I think my after﹣school life is colorful because I not only can do the things I like most，but also stay close with my friends and family．I will try harder to make my after﹣school life more colorful and meaningful．（高分句型二）（要点三，说明我课余生活丰富多彩的原因及实现的决心．）
【点评】本题是图画作文，能够根据图画提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
5．你校校报对全校800名学生喜欢阅读的图书类型做了一次调查，假如你是校报的小记者王丹，请根据邮件及表格提示，给校报的负责入John写一封回信。 注意：词数：80﹣100（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Wang Dan，
We made a survey among 800 students in our school to find out what kind of books they like best.Now we need to write an article for the school newspaper about the findings.What are the results of the survey？What kind of books do they prefer（ 更喜欢）？Why？Please reply as soon as possible. Yours， John
Kinds of books Cartoons Stories Science books
Dear John，
In the survey，________.
Yours， Wang Dan
【分析】【高分句型一】
They don't have to think too much when they watch them.他们看的时候不需要想太多。 when引导时间状语从句。 【高分句型二】
26% of the students like reading science books.26%的学生喜欢阅读科学书籍。 like doing sth喜欢做某事。 【解答】Dear John，
Students 53% 31% 26%
Reasons（why） interesting… easy to read
…
In the survey，They chose their favorite ones from cartoons，stories and science books.From the chart，the results can be shown.（点题）
53% of the students like to read cartoons best because they think cartoons are easy to understand.They don't have to think too much when they watch them. 【高分句型一】31% of the students say that stories are their favorites.Because there are many interesting experiences in these stories.26% of the students like reading science books. 【高分句型二】These books will help them open up an unknown world.（调查结果及原因）
Yours， Wang Dan 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
6．假定你是某校初中毕业生李明，母校将为初一新生举办主题为\"How to become a successful middle school student？\" 的英语沙龙活动特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会．请根据以下提纲准备一份英语发言稿．
What to do
develop the good leaning habits
How to do it
learn from mistakes ，ask questions
follow the school rules
……
注意：1．词数：80 左右，开头已经给出，不计入词数；
2．除表格提供的建议外，必须至少再说出一条建议，并做适当发挥．
…… ……
Good morning，everyone!It is my honour to be here to share w ith you my opinions on how to become a successful middle school student． ．
【分析】【高分句型一】
Firstly ，developing the good learning habits is of great importance．首先，培养良好的学习习惯非常重要．
动名词做主语，be of great importance 很重要 【高分句型二】
Ask anybody questions not only your teachers but also your classmates．不仅要问你的老师，还要问你的同学．
not only…but also不但……而且……
【解答】Good morning ，everyone!It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on how to become a successful middle school student．
Firstly ，developing the good learning habits is of great importance【高分句型一】．Ask anybody questions not only your teachers but also your classmates【高分句型二】．And learn
from mistakes instead of being afraid of making mistakes．Secondly ，following the school rules will help．School rules are made to make sure that every student is safe and concentrates on study．Thirdly ，make friends with people around you．As the saying goes ， \"friends are the families we choose \"．We are happier when we are with friends．
All in all ，a successful middle school student can well balance study and life．Thank you． 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
7．假设你是 Li Ming，请根据表格提供的学校拓展性课程信息，结合图中提供的个人爱好，写一篇英语小短文，简单介绍一下个人信息，学校的课程安排和你最喜欢的课程及其原因． 要求：
1．短文需要包含表格和图中所有信息，并作适当的想象和发挥． 2．注意不要出现个人与学校真是信息． 3．不少于 60 词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Name：Li Ming Age：13 Likes：science；soccer
Time
3：30 p．m．﹣4：30 p．m．Tuesday 3：30 p．m．﹣4：30 p．m．Friday
Subjects English songs
American history，3 D printing（打印）
Basketball，soccer，
art
I am Li Ming． I'm thirteen years old．I like science and soccer．I often play soccer with my friends after school．I like singing English songs because I like English best．I like history especially American history．We have English and history from 3：30 p．m．to 4：30 p．m．on Tuesday．We have basketball，soccer and art from 3：30 p．m．to 4：30 p．m．on Friday． ． 【分析】【高分句型一】
I often play soccer with my friends after school．放学后我经常和我的朋友们一起踢足球． play with和…一起玩． 【高分句型二】
I like singing English songs because I like English best．我喜欢唱英语歌因为我最喜欢英语． like…best最喜欢…；because引导原因状语从句．
【解答】I am Li Ming．I'm thirteen years old． （姓名年龄）I like science and soccer．I often play soccer with my friends after school． 【高分句型一】I like singing English songs because I like English best． 【高分句型二】I like history especially American history． （爱好）We have English and history from 3：30 p．m．to 4：30 p．m．on Tuesday．We have
basketball，soccer and art from 3：30 p．m．to 4：30 p．m．on Friday． （课程安排） 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
8．假如你是李平，交换生Jim很快来你校学习，并住在你家。请阅读以下来自Jim的邮件并回复。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Li Ping，
Thanks for telling me about your school life. I can't wait to start my life there next month. But I'm also wondering what to do in my free time. Can you tell me the best place to go to on weekends in your neighborhood？ How often do you go there？ And why do you like it？ Look forward to your reply.
Yours， Jim
Dear Jim，
Yours， Li Ping 【分析】【高分句型一】
I think the care center is the best place to go on weekends in our neighborhood. 我认为护理中心是我们社区周末最好的去处。 I think+宾语从句。
the best place to do sth做某事的最好地方。 【高分句型二】
I chat with old people about their lives. 我和老人谈论他们的生活。 chat with和……聊天。 【解答】Dear Jim，
I can't wait to see you here. There are many things you can do in your free time.（点题） I think the care center is the best place to go on weekends in our neighborhood. 【高分句型一】I go there once a week. I go to the care center to help people in need. I teach children reading skills and drawing. I chat with old people about their lives. 【高分句型二】I feel happy to do something for others. I hope you will enjoy it too.（介绍空闲时间的活动） Looking forward to your reply!（期待）
Yours， Li Ping 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
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9．假如你是李明，以下是你学校的英语节安排表．此时你收到了外教老师Jenna给你的一封邮件，请根据她的邮件内容进行回复．
词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数．
English Day
Date January 15th
Time 9：00﹣11：30 14：00﹣15：30
Dear Li Ming，
It's so great to know that you are going to have an English Day in your school! I am really interested in that and I hope I can join you guys! Could you please tell me something about the time， the place and what we can do that day？ And is there anything I can do to help you prepare for the big event？ Write to me and let me know!
Yours， Jenna
Dear Jenna， I'm
so
glad
to
know
that
you
are
interested
in
our
English Yours， Li Ming
【分析】【高分句型一】
If you come to our school， please call me．
如果你来我们学校，请给我打电话．if引导条件状语从句． 【高分句型二】
Looking forward to seeing you．
期待见到你．look forward to doing sth期待做某事． 【解答】Dear Jenna，
I'm so glad to know that you are interested in our English Day． I tell you some information about it．（点题） It will be held from on January 15th． It has two parts． One part is from 9：00 to 11：30， and it is at the art theater． There will be some English Talent shows there． The other part is between 14：00 and 15：30， and it is at Classroom 7 E． English Corner will take place． All of the teachers and students in our school will attend the big event．（具体介绍时间、地点和活动）
If you come to our school， please call me．【高分句型一】 I will meet you at the school gate．（相约地点）
Looking forward to seeing you．【高分句型二】 Yours， Li Ming
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和Day． ___________________________．
Place The art theater Classroom 7 E
Activities English Talent Show English Corner
句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
10．假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda 的电子邮件。请你阅读来信后回复。词数80左右。 Subject： From：Linda To：Li Ping Dear Li Ping，
How's it going？We haven't written to each other for a year.I think both of us may change a lot.What are you like now？Which is the most important change for you？The biggest change for me is that I fall in love with Chinese tea.As far as I know，Hangzhou is famous for tea.Can you tell me how tea is produced in your city？Hope to hear form you soon. Love， Linda Dear Linda，
I'm glad to hear from you.It's been a year since I wrote to you last time. . I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours， Li Ping
【分析】【高分句型一】
The biggest change for me is that I fall in love with English movies.对我来说最大的变化是我爱上了英语电影。 that引导表语从句。 fall in love with 爱上。 【高分句型二】
Watching English movies not only makes me practice my listening and speaking，but also makes me learn a lot about Western culture.看英语电影不仅能锻炼我的听力和口语，还能让我学到很多关于西方文化的知识。 not only…but also…不仅……而且…… 【解答】Dear Linda，
I'm glad to hear from you.It's been a year since I wrote to you last time.I'm a different person now.I became tall and strong.I took up many hobbies.The biggest change for me is that I fall in love with English movies.【高分句型一】Watching English movies not only makes me practice my listening and speaking，but also makes me learn a lot about Western culture.【高分句型二】（最大的变化是什么）
Hangzhou is famous for tea.Tea has a history of thousands of years in China.People usually plant tea on the side of the hill.When it is ready，it is picked by hand and sent to factories for processing. （介绍茶是如何种植的） I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours， Li Ping
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
11．为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，某英语网站正在举办以\"My Mother\"为主题的征文活动．请根据下列思维导图所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍你的母亲和你与母亲间的故事．
参考词汇：give much to…，It's my turn to…，try my best to… 提示：
1）短文内容须包括所给内容，含母亲曾为你所做的事和你将为母亲所做的事各一件，并阐述原因；
2）请注意短文结构层次、时态运用和卷面整洁度； 3）词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4）文中不得出现学校和个人的相关信息． My Mother
We need love．We also need to show love．The person I love most is my
mother． The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．Shi is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me． When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think ．
【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以\"My mother\"为题介绍自己的母亲和你们的真情故事．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称和第三人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1介绍：年龄，工作，外貌，能力，爱好 2她为我做的事 3我将会为她做什么 常用到的重点短语： even though即使 grow up 长大
make sb+adj使某人怎么样 like doing sth喜欢做某事 cook…for sb为某人做… graduate from…从…毕业 【高分句型】
1．She bought ①whatever I needed for my study，②even though she didn't have much money． ①whatever无论什么．引导的宾语从句，作为buy的宾语． ②even though引导的让步状语从句．
2．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．
that make her look still young是一定语从句，修饰先行词clothes，关系词that作为定语从句的主语，不可省略．
3．①Most importantly，I will stay with her②when I have free time． ①Most importantly最重要的 ②when引导的时间状语从句． 【解答】My mother
We need love．We also need to love．The person I love most is my mother．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．Shi is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．（介绍）
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．【高分句型】She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．（她为我做的事） When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．【高分句型】I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．【高分句型】That's what she wants most，I think．（我将会为她做什么）
【点评】本题是一篇图表作文，图表作为书面表达的一种信息提示方式，比提纲作文线索显得更简洁明了，写作时也容易区分表达，本题是介绍自己的母亲，学生们有话可说，在写作时，要特别注意几种情况的描述，不能逐句翻译，同时要根据提示有效灵活的构思，恰当使用逻辑词语，让文章显得有条理，不杂乱．
12．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作．文中已给出内容不计入总词
数．（注意：请不要写出你的校名和姓名．）
假如你是李华，美国中学生托尼是你的笔友，他想了解一下中国学生在假期一般都做什么事情．下面的图表是你对班里同学假期活动的调查结果．请你根据这个图标给Tony回信．（简述调查结果，并谈谈你的假期计划安排及理由．） Dear Tony，
I've received your email and it's my turn to tell you something about what we Chinese students usually do during holidays． ．
Yours Li Hua．
【分析】【高分句型一】
I am good at singing and dancing， so I can put this love to good use by spending time with these elders．
我擅长唱歌和跳舞，所以我可以通过和这些老人们共度时光来好好利用这种爱．be good at…擅长……，put sth to good use好好利用……， 【高分句型二】
Not only can I take the chance to do something meaningful， but I can improve my own English by teaching others．
我不仅能抓住机会做些有意义的事，而且可以通过教别人来提高自己的英语水平．not only…but （also）…不但……而且……，not only位于句首连接并列谓语要部分倒装． 【解答】Dear Tony，
I've received your email and it's my turn to tell you something about what we Chinese students usually do during holidays． I did a survey about vacation activities among my classmates． Here are the results．（开篇点题）
Among the fifty﹣eight students taking part in the survey， seventeen of them stay at home， fifteen of them take part in some volunteer activities and twenty﹣eight students travel either in China or abroad．All the students have classes．（调查结果）
As for me， I am going to volunteer my time to help others． First， I am going to visit an old people's home to cheer them up． I am good at singing and dancing， so I can put this love to good use by spending time with these elders．【高分句型一】Helping children with their
English at an after﹣school teaching center is also a good choice for me． English has always been my favorite subject and I am among the best English learners in my class． Not only can I take the chance to do something meaningful， but I can improve my own English by teaching others． 【高分句型二】I am sure I will have a busy and wonderful winter vacation．（假期计划安排及理由）If you have more questions， please ask me．
Yours， Li Hua
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
13．假如你是Steven， 在即将到来的英语节中，你校将举行\"最美学生\"评选及英语推荐征文活动．现请你写一封英文推荐信，推荐你们班的Peter．推荐信要点如下：
年龄外貌 性格特征 个人爱好 具体事迹 你的评价
14岁，戴眼镜，高大帅气 聪明好学，乐于助人 会弹吉他，还参加了足球俱乐部
上周末，去敬老院（old people's home）看望老人，给老人弹吉他、唱歌
……（至少一点）
要求：1．必须包含以上表内所给要点，可适当发挥，但不能出现真实姓名和校名； 2．注意人称、时态，要求条理清晰，语意连贯，字迹工整； 3．词数：70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）． Dear headmaster，
Happy to know that we're going to choose \"The Most Beautiful Students\" in our school． I think Peter is the best for it． ．
Yours， Steven
【分析】【高分句型一】
Besides， he is always ready to help others．此外，他总是乐于帮助别人． be ready to do sth准备做某事． 【高分句型二】
I believe he is one of the most beautiful students．我相信他是最美丽的一个学生． I believe+宾语从句． 【解答】Dear headmaster，
Happy to know that we're going to choose \"The Most Beautiful Students\" in our school． I think Peter is the best for it． （点题）As a 14﹣year﹣old boy， he is tall and handsome with glasses．（年龄外貌） He is very smart， but he still works hard．Besides， he is always ready to help others．【高分句型一】（性格特征） He can play the guitar well． Also he joins the football club．（个人爱好） Last weekend， he visited the old people's home． He enjoyed playing the guitar and sang songs for the old people．（具体事迹）What a great student he is! I
believe he is one of the most beautiful students．（我的评价）【高分句型二】
Yours， Steven
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
14．英语周报将举办以\"My happy family\"为题的演讲比赛，请你根据表格信息及英文提示写一篇符合逻辑的演讲稿．短文不少于40个词
人物 职业身份 年龄 爱好
loves bikes
father teacher 38
mother cook 37
I student 14 like
basketball
riding likes
reading
Hello，everyone．My name is Tim．I have a happy family．There are 3 people in it．They are my father，my mother and I． ． 【分析】高分句型一
He likes riding a bike．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语like doing sth \"喜欢做某事\"，短语ride a bike \"骑自行车\"，此句可翻译为\"他喜欢骑自行车．\" 高分句型二
I love my family．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语love sth \"爱某事\"，此句可翻译为\"我爱我家．\"
【解答】My happy family
My name is Tim．I have a happy family．（要点一，介绍自己的姓名及有一个幸福的家庭．）There are 3 people in it．They are my father，my mother and I． My father is a teacher． He is 38 years old．He likes riding a bike．（高分句型一） My mother is a cook． She is 37 years old．She likes reading．I am a middle school student． I'm 14 years old． I like playing basketball．（要点二，介绍自己的所有家庭成员的职业、年龄及爱好．）This is my family．I love my family．（高分句型二）（要点三，我的观点．） 【点评】本题是图表作文，能够根据图表提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
15．书面表达
一年一度的\"羊城书香节\"即将来临，某校对九年级的学生的课外阅读情况做了个问卷调查．请根
据下列调查数据和相关文字提示，以 Let's Read More!为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明课外阅读的现状和
意义，并就中学生如何更好地开展课外阅读活动提出你的建议．
注意：1）所写内容必须包括表格里的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2）文字不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称： 3）表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
4）词数不少于 80．文字的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．．Let's Read More!
To go with the Yang Cheng Reading Festival，our school has done a survey． It found that most students spend less than one hour reading books after class each day，while 33% read for one to two hours，and only 11% read for over three hours． As we all know ，it is important for us to read in our life．Reading can not only increase our knowledge，tell us how to solve problems，but also help us have good habits． In my opinion，I think it's time for us to do more reading．We can also share our books and ideas with our friends or teachers．In this way，we can have a deeper understanding． ． 【分析】高分句型：
As we all know ，it is important for us to read in our life．众所周知，在我们的生活中阅读是很重要的．这里it is important for sb to do sth表示对某人来说做某事很重要．
In my opinion，I think it's time for us to do more reading．在我看来，我认为是我们多读书的时候了．这里it's time for sb to do sth表示对某人来说到做某事的时间了． 【解答】Let's Read More!
To go with the Yang Cheng Reading Festival，our school has done a survey．（引出话题）It found that most students spend less than one hour reading books after class each day，while 33% read for one to two hours，and only 11% read for over three hours．（调查的结果）
As we all know ，it is important for us to read in our life．（高分句型）Reading can not only increase our knowledge，tell us how to solve problems，but also help us have good habits．（阅读的意义）
In my opinion，I think it's time for us to do more reading．（高分句型）We can also share our books and ideas with our friends or teachers．In this way，we can have a deeper understanding．（我的建议）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
16．Susan 的书包在班里是最整齐的，课堂上老师让Susan将她的书包展示给同学们看，请根据下面的内容要点写一篇短文，简单介绍一下Susan 并描绘一下她的书包． 内容要点：
Age Favorite sport The color of the schoolbag
Something in it
作文要求：语句连贯，60词左右． Susan is_________________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】 She thinks it's easy for her．
她认为这对她来说很容易．be easy for sb． 对某人来说容易 【高分句型二】
There are two notebooks， a pencil case and an orange pen in it．
里面有两个笔记本， 一个铅笔盒和一支橙色的钢笔．本句使用了there be句型，there be…有……
【解答】Susan is a 12﹣year﹣old girl． （年龄）Her favorite sport is tennis． （最喜欢的运动）She thinks it's easy for her． 【高分句型一】She plays tennis with her classmates after school．Look，what's that on the desk？Oh，is is Susan's schoolbag． It's blue．There are two notebooks， a pencil case and an orange pen in it．【高分句型二】（对书包的描述） 【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
12 网球 （容易的）
蓝色
两个笔记本， 一个铅笔盒，一个橙色的钢笔
17．随着手机功能日益增多，越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动，成为\"手机控\"一族．假定你是某校学生，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，向某英文报社投稿，谈谈你对该现象的看法和建议．
\"手机控\"的表现
沉迷于手机娱乐活动（聊天、看电影等），与朋友和家人的交流减少，离开手机会有焦
虑症等异常情绪表现…
\"手机控\"的危害 你的建议
注意：1．内容须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
对健康不利，影响学习…
…
参考词汇：手机控a phone freak焦虑anxious（adj．）沉迷于be addicted to …
3.90个单词左右．开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
Today，many people，especially young people，are phone freaks．They ． 【分析】这是一篇图表作文．内容是向某英文报社投稿，谈谈你对\"手机控\"的看法和建议．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1\"手机控\"的表现：沉迷于手机娱乐活动（聊天、看电影等），与朋友和家人的交流减少，离开手机会有焦虑症等异常情绪表现… 2\"手机控\"的危害：对健康不利，影响学习… 3 你的建议 常用到的重点短语：
spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事 communicate with sb 与某人交流 be good for 对…有益 do harm to 对…不利 focus on专注于 pay attention to 关注
【高分句型】
1．①Besides，②focusing on mobile phone entertainment can affect students' study． ①besides 另外
②动名词短语做主语．focus on专注于．
2．①If they fill their time this way，they won't have too much spare time ②to think about phone entertainment
①if 引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则． ②动词不定式做目的状语．
【解答】Today many people，especially young people，are phone freaks．They spend a lot of time playing games，seeing movies，or reading novels on their smart phone，and thus communicate with their family and friends less．Without phone in hand，they will feel anxious and don't know what to do．（\"手机控\"的表现）As we know，too long screen time is not good for health．It does great harm to our neck and eyes．Besides，focusing on mobile phone entertainment can affect students' study【高分句型】．（\"手机控\"的危害）I think young people should spend more time doing sports or being with their family and friends．They should also pay more attention to their studies．If they fill their time this way，they won't have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment．【高分句型】（我的建议）
【点评】本题是一篇图表作文，图表作为书面表达的一种信息提示方式，比提纲作文线索显得更简洁明了，写作时也容易区分表达，本题在写作时，要特别注意几种情况的描述，不能逐句翻译，同时要根据提示有效灵活的构思，恰当使用逻辑词语，让文章显得有条理，不杂乱
18．请根据以下提示介绍你家人的日常生活，要求 80 词以上。
爸爸：工程师，在实验室（lab） 工作。为了（in order to） 不污染空气，爸爸从不开车上班。每天走六公里路。
妈妈：地理老师。早上6：30起床，8：00到学校，每周有12节课。晚上经常需要备课，很少看电视。
哥哥：16岁，爱好：听音乐和做运动；放学后有时候参加学校的社团（club） 活动；晚饭后经常帮助我学习。
周末的家庭活动：（请你补充）
My Family
There are four people in my family.__________________________ 【分析】【高分句型一】
In order not to pollute the air， my father walks six kilometers to work every day instead of driving a car. 为了不污染空气，我父亲每天步行六公里去上班而不开车。 in order to do sth为了做某事。 instead of而不是…… 【高分句型二】
He often helps me with my studies after supper.晚饭后他经常帮助我学习。 help with帮助某人做某事。 【解答】
My Family
There are four people in my family. They are my parents， my brother and I.（点题）My father is an engineer. He works in a lab.In order not to pollute the air， my father walks six kilometers to work every day instead of driving a car. 【高分句型一】My mother is a geography teacher.She gets up at 6：30 in the morning and goes to school at 8：00.She has twelve classes a week.She often needs to prepare for her lessons in the evening， so she seldom watches TV.My brother is sixteen years old.He likes listening to music and doing sports.He sometimes takes part in club activities after school.He often helps me with my studies after supper.【高分句型二】（介绍家人）At weekends， we often go for a picnic.（周末活动） I love my family.（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
19．假设你是John，最近你向朋友Tom分享了自己寒假的学习和生活．请根据提示，写一篇90词左右的邮件．
1． 寒假每天7点半起床，10点半睡觉． 2． 参加数学和英语补习班（take……classes ） 3． 按计划完成各科作业 4． 帮忙做家务如搞卫生，购物． 5． 自己观点2点．
要求： 1． 文章必须包含全部要点内容，可作合理拓展； 2． 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
Hi， Tom． What's going on？ I would like to tell you something about my holiday life．
Yours， John
【分析】【高分句型一】
I would like to tell you something about my holiday life．我想告诉你一些关于我的假期生活． would like to do sth想做某事． 【高分句型二】
I have to study hard this term because I will have the final exam in 3 months．这学期我必须努力学习，因为三个月后我就要期末考试了． because引导原因状语从句．
【解答】Hi ，Tom． What's going on？I would like to tell you something about my holiday life．【高分句型一】（点题）
During the Winter Holiday， I did a lot of things． First， I got up at half past seven in the morning even though it was cold， and I went to bed at half past ten at night every day． Second， I took part in Maths and English lessons to learn more． Third， I finished all my homework according to my plan． Forth， I helped do some housework． For example， I often cleaned the floor or did some shopping for my family． Fifth， I did exercise often．Going to the park to have a walk or jogging was my favourite． Sixth， visiting my relatives during the Spring Festival was my lucky time because I could get lucky money! I have to study hard this term because I will have the final exam in 3 months． 【高分句型二】（介绍寒假学习和生活）
Yours， John 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
20．水污染是当今世界的一个严重问题．假设你是李华，你家住中山路8号，你家附近有个工厂经常排出污水，污染水源，请你根据所提供的信息，写一封信给市长，向他反映目前水污染的状况． 内容要点：
1写信的目的是为了家附近的水污染问题．
2我家附近有一个化学工厂，它把很多的污水和垃圾都倒到河中． 3这污染水源而且对人们的健康有害，我家和邻居都受到了影响． 4如果市长你可以禁止工厂污染水源，我们将万分感谢． 要求：
1文章要求词数不少于60词．
2 短文要包含所给的提示信息，可适当发挥； 3 短文开头部分已给出，不计入总字数． 参考词汇：
化学工厂 chemistry factory，影响 be influenced by，万分感谢 be very grateful Dear Mayor，
My name is Li Hua and I live at No.8 in Zhongshan Road．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．
【分析】高分句型： 高分句型一：
The polluted water is bad for health．污染了的水对健康是有害的．polluted 是过去分词来修饰名词water，说明水是被污染的，be bad for是一个固定短语，意思是\"对…有害\" 高分句型二：
As we all know，water is very important to us and we can't live without it．众所周知，水对我们来说是很重要的，没有水，我们就不能生活．As we all know是一个固定短语，意思是\"众所周知\"be important to sb．意思是\"对某人是很重要的\" 【解答】Dear Mayor，
My name is Li Hua and I live at No.8 in Zhongshan Road．I am writing to ask for your help about the water pollution problem near my home．
Near my home，there is a chemistry factory that pours so much polluted water and rubbish into the river．The polluted water is bad for health．【高分句型一】（说明水的重要性）Moreover，I and my neighbour have been influenced by it．
As we all know，water is very important to us and we can't live without it．【高分句型二：】（着重强调是水的重要性，再一次提醒大家）If you forbid the chemistry factory to pollute water，we can save lots of water and we will be very grateful for you． Looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely， Li Hua
【点评】首先要仔细认真审题，注意要使用的时态和人称，在表述的时候要注意使用恰当合理的英语语句，特别是要使用定语从句，固定短语等等可以给文章增色的结构．
21．上月你们学校开展了中国周（Chinese Week） 活动，你参加了各种各样有趣的活动。现学校英文广播站正在征稿，请根据以下内容提示完成投稿。
活动内容
*表演中国传统戏剧，介绍中国历史与文化；
*中餐厨艺比赛，推广健康饮食习惯； *（补充一点活动内容）
你的感受 （补 充你的感受）
Chinese Week
We had a wonderful Chinese week at our school last month.____________ 【分析】【高分句型一】
We also held a paper cutting show， which let us know the wonderful traditional culture of China.我们还举办了剪纸展，让我们了解了中国优秀的传统文化。 which引导非限定性定语从句。 【高分句型二】
Through this activity， we learned about the history and culture of China. 通过这次活动，我们了解了中国的历史和文化。 learn abut了解关于…… 【解答】
Chinese Week
We had a wonderful Chinese week at our school last month.（点题）We performed traditional Chinese operas and introduced Chinese history and culture.We also held a Chinese cooking competition.It helps spread healthy eating habits.We also held a paper cutting show， which let us know the wonderful traditional culture of China.【高分句型一】（活动内容）
Through this activity， we learned about the history and culture of China. 【高分句型二】We are proud of China.（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
22．上个月，你参加了学校举行的英语周活动。请根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文，在班会上介绍英语周的活动情况并分享你的收获与感受。 参与人员 活动项目 你参加的项目 你的感受与收获 注意：
1. 词数：80词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点适当发挥）。 2. 可根据内容适当发挥。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分 Hello， everyone! We had an English Week in our school last month. . 【分析】【高分句型一】
We became more interested in English and our speaking ability has greatly improved.我们对英语越来越感兴趣，口语能力也有了很大的提高。 became interested in对……感兴趣。 【高分句型二】
所有的学生和英语老师 英文演讲比赛，看英文电影… 英文演讲比赛并拿到一等奖 …
I think it is a good way to learn English. think后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句。 a good way to do sth做某事的好方法。
【解答】Hello， everyone! We had an English Week in our school last month.（点题） All the students and our English teachers took part in it.（参加人员）During the week，we sang English songs，joined in English speaking contests，and watched English films.We told stories in English.（活动内容）
We became more interested in English and our speaking ability has greatly improved.【高分句型一】As everyone knows，practice makes perfect.I learned a lot from the activity.I think it is a good way to learn English．【高分句型二】I like it very much.（收获和感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
23．假如你是李明，是一名初三学生，今年你被学校评为\"校园阅读之星\"．你远在美国的笔友 Mike，听说你过去不喜欢看书，但是现在热爱阅读，想请你介绍在这三年来，阅读在身体、心理、学习等方面给你带来的一些好处．此外，她他也请你给他提一些提升阅读速度的建议．请你给 Mike 发一封电子邮件．
内容包括：（1）阅读的好处（如让我觉得写作更简单；我变得对学习感兴趣；使我内心充满力量，不觉得孤独寂寞等等．）
（2）提升阅读速度的方法（如不要逐字阅读；通过阅读大量书籍；） 要求（1）短文必须包含全部要点，可适当发挥． （2）文中不可出现学校和自己的真实姓名； 字数：80 词左右
Dear Mike，
Thanks for your letter． How's everything going？ I think reading is really helpful． I didn't use to
I am looking forward to hearing from you! Yours， Li Ming 【分析】【高分句型一】
Reading can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring more happiness．读书不仅可以帮助我们了解更多的世界，也可以带来更多的快乐． 动名词作主语．
not only…but also 不仅…而且…连接两个对等成分． help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事 【高分句型二】
It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's important and necessary for us．是我们养成良好阅读习惯的时候了，因为这对我们来说很重要也是必要的． It's time for sb to do sth 某人做某事的时间到了 because引导的原因状语从句． 【解答】Dear Mike，
Thanks for your letter． How's everything going？
I think reading is really helpful． I didn't use to read books，but now I like reading． I will share my experience with you．（点题）
I think reading is important in the whole life for people．Reading makes writing easier for me． I become interested in learning now． My heart is full of power and I no longer feel lonely． Reading can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring more happiness．【高分句型】（阅读的好处）
But how to improve reading speed？ Don't read word for word． I think it is important to improve reading speed by reading a lot of books．（提升阅读速度的方法）
It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's important and necessary for us．【高分句型】I will make good use of my summer vacation to read． I believe I will enjoy reading in the summer vacation． （读书计划） I am looking forward to hearing from you! Yours， Li Ming
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
24．下面是一份关于九年级学生语文课外阅读情况的问卷调查表，每个调查项目之后有几个选项，请将符合自己实际情况的选项打\"?\"（除前两个项目外，其他均可多选）．然后，根据你的选择，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍自己的语文课外阅读情况，并谈谈你的想法．
课文课外阅读问卷调查表
调查项目 （1）阅读兴趣 （2）阅读时间
选项
A．喜欢 B．有点喜欢 C．不喜欢 A．每天阅读 B．有时阅读 C．很少阅读
D．完全不读
（3）阅读内容
A．小说 B．散文 C．诗歌
D．其他
（4）阅读目的 （5）阅读书籍
A．提高语文水平 B．增加知识 C．休闲娱乐
D．其他
A．自己选择 B．父母购买 C．教师指定
D．其他
（6）影响阅读的因素 注意： ①无须写标题；
A．学习压力太大 B．教师没有要求 C．没有书籍可
读 D．其他
②内容必须包含调查表中6个项目，以及关于课外阅读的想法； ③文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名； ④词数为80左右．
参考词汇：fiction小说；essay散文．
【分析】这是一份给材料作文．首先要根据自己的情况填写一份关于九年级学生语文课外阅读情况的问卷调查表，然后根据自己的选择，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍自己的语文课外阅读情况，并谈谈自己的想法．要用第一人称，一般现在时态．文中可加however、so等连词，可使文章更通顺． 【解答】参考范文1
I like reading very much．I always do some reading in my free time．My favorite books are fictions．On weekends，I often go to the bookstore to buy what I like．My parents buy some books for me as gifts．I think reading is very interesting and helpful．It not only makes me relaxed but also improves my Chinese，especially my writing．However，as students of Grade Nine，we are under great pressure of study，and now it's nearly impossible for us to do some reading after class．So I hope Chinese teachers will give us more time to read．I believe the more we read，the better we'll do in exams． 短文写作参考范文2
I like reading a little．Sometimes I do some reading just for fun．I enjoy cartoons better than any other kinds of books because they are very interesting．At times I go to the bookstore to buy cartoons，and I also borrow some from my friends．Our teachers are always telling us that reading is important and we can learn a lot by reading．But I'm not interested in the books that our Chinese teacher asks us to read，such as fictions，essays and some science books．I hope she can choose some more interesting books for us．Maybe that will make me like reading．As we all know，interest is the best teacher．
【点评】书面表达要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容．在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题．审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等．
25．
From： Bill Hi， Li Ping，
How is everything going？ Last month， I saw a movie called My People My Homeland. It's such a great movie and it showed me the great change China has made. I am really interested in your hometown. I wonder where your hometown is？ What did it use to be like？
And what's the biggest change in your city？ Besides， could you please tell me what your city is famous for？ Hope you can tell me more about it. Looking forward to hearing from you. Dear Bill，
I am glad to hear from you.
Yours， Li Ping
【分析】【高分句型一】
What's more， the biggest change is that more and more people are living better and happier lives.更重要的是，最大的变化是越来越多的人生活得更好，更幸福。 that引导表语从句。 【高分句型二】
Today's Shijiazhuang is a beauty and modern city， which is famous because of its rich of human geological resources.今天的石家庄是一座美丽而现代的城市，因其丰富的人文地质资源而闻名于世。
which引导非限定性定语从句。 【解答】Dear Bill，
I am glad to hear from you and I am happy to share with you about my hometown， Shijiazhuang. （点题）Shijiazhuang is the capital of Hebei province， 280 km to Beijing in the south and 270 km to Tianjin. Shijiazhuang is quite different from ten years ago. In the past， there was a little road in the city. The road was very narrow and the traffic was very heavy. There were only three parks in the city at ten years ago. The air pollution was very serious. （过去的样子）However， with the development of social economy and science and technology， Shijiazhuang has been developing in a good direction. The roads get wider， and there are more and more parks. Of course， the air also improved a lot. What's more， the biggest change is that more and more people are living better and happier lives.【高分句型一】（哪些变化以及最大的变化） Today's Shijiazhuang is a beauty and modern city， which is famous because of its rich of human geological resources.【高分句型二】（以什么出名） It attracts many foreigners to come here to go sightseeing and makes here develop very fast. Welcome to my hometown with your family.（表示欢迎）
Yours， Li Ping
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
26．David参加了一个社区的交友活动，请根据下表所提示的内容，介绍他的新朋友Tom．
学习
1．爱学习．努力学习，所有学科都学得很好．
2．爱助人．经常帮助同学复习功课．
爱好 1．爱运动．篮球打得好，下学期想进入校篮球队．
2．爱动物．养兔子当宠物，并能照顾好．
评价 对Tom的评价（自拟）
要求： （1）词数80左右．短文开头部分已为你写好，不计入总词数； （2）条理清楚，语意连贯；紧扣主题，适当发挥；书写规范，标点正确； （3）短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名和人名． Tom is my new friend． 【分析】【高分句型一】
He is good at all the subjects， so he can always get good grades．他擅长所有的科目，所以他总能取得好成绩． be good at擅长… 【高分句型二】
I think Tom is not only a clever student， but also a very good friend．我认为汤姆不仅是一个聪明的学生，也是一个很好的朋友．
I think+宾语从句；not only…but also…不仅…而且…
【解答】Tom is my new friend． He is twelve years old． He is tall and thin． He is good at all the subjects， so he can always get good grades．【高分句型一】 He often helps me with my English and I often help him with his Chinese．（学习）He loves sports and plays basketball well．He wants to join the school basketball team next term．He also loved animals．He keeps a rabbit as a pet and takes good care of it．（爱好）I think Tom is not only a clever student， but also a very good friend．【高分句型二】I hope we will be friends forever．（我的评价及希望）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
27．报社正在征集关于初三学生英语学习经验的文章，请根据以下要点，写一篇征文稿． 要点：
1． 刚入学时学英语很费劲，有时无法正确拼写单词，语法了解的不多． 2． 无法振作，想放弃．
3． 后来每天练习说英语，经常复习学过的知识．
4． 已经取得了很大的进步，现在能够记住单词的正确发音． 5． 你的感悟…（适当发挥 1 ～ 2 句） 提示： 1． 90 词左右 2． 包括所有要点 3． 合理发挥
4． 文章流畅，字迹清晰 When I entered middle school， 【分析】【高分句型一】
When I entered middle school，I had great difficulty in learning English． 当我进入中学时，我在学习英语方面有很大的困难．when引导时间状语从句． 【高分句型二】
I believe if we can show great interest in learning English and keep trying， we can learn English well．
我相信如果我们能对学习英语表现出极大的兴趣并不断努力，我们就能学好英语．if引导原因状语从句．show great interest in 对……表现出极大的兴趣．
【解答】When I entered middle school，I had great difficulty in learning English．【高分句型一】 I couldn't remember English words and I couldn't understand what my English teacher said in class． I lost heart and wanted to give up．（ 刚入学时遇到的问题） Later， I asked my teachers and classmates for help． I kept on reading English， listened to my teacher carefully and spoke English as much as possible．（采取的措施）So far， I have made great progress in English．（取得的进步）
I believe if we can show great interest in learning English and keep trying， we can learn English well．【高分句型二】（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
28．假如你是在南京学习的英国交流学生Max，你的英国同学Simon 给你写了一封电子邮件．请你根据邮件内容，用英语给Simon 回一封电子邮件． Hey Max，
I haven't heard from you since you in Nanjing．How are you getting on？Is everything OK with the school you study in？What are your English classes like？ Write soon! Yours． Simon 注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条例清楚，书写规范；
3．词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数． Hi Simon，
Sorry I haven't written till now． ．
Yours， Max．
【分析】这是一篇应用文，让我们回复英国同学Simon的一封电子邮件，首先要看懂邮件的内容，确定Simon想要知道的事情．内容是开放的，需要我们发挥自己的想象力、创造力和思维力，把这些内容补充完整．由题目可知，写作时要用第一人称，时态为一般现在时，内容要点包括：介绍自己的情况、介绍学校及日常活动、介绍新学校的英语课以及结束语．
重要短语及高分句型： be busy with 忙于做某事 get on well with sb． 与某人相处融洽 on weekdays 在平时 send sb．sth． 寄某物给某人
I'm really busy with the courses and making new friends these days．
这些天我真的是在忙于课程以及交朋友．be busy with忙于做某事，make friends交朋友，两个短语用得很好．
After school，we can do some sports to relax．
放学后，我们可以做一些运动来放松一下．after school放学后，do sports做运动，用得好；以及to relax不定式表目的．
English classes in China are not like ones in Britain．
中国的英语课不像英国的．like介词，像；ones是代词，代替前面的English classes． 【解答】One possible version： Hi Simon，
Sorry I haven't written till now．I'm really busy with the courses and making new friends these days．（高分句型）I think people here are kind and friendly and I am getting on well with them．（介绍自己的情况）
My school is large and beautiful．We have lessons on weekdays．School starts at 8 a．m．and finishes at 4：30 p．m．After school，we can do some sports to relax．（高分句型）（介绍学校及日常活动）
English classes in China are not like ones in Britain．（高分句型）The texts are easy．Sometimes we practise a lot in class．And sometimes we play games after class．（介绍新学校的英语课）
I will send you some photos of my school next time．Take care!（结束语） Yours， Max
【点评】写电子邮件时，首先要看懂对方邮件的内容，弄清对方想知道的事情，最好列一下提纲，然后根据提纲进行写作就不会造成离题或偏题，但要注意，文章必须要覆盖整个要点，行文要注意简化，不要拖沓冗长，要使用正确的句子，同时注意，要使用一定的连接词，比如：first，second，what's more，finally等．再者，在作文完成时要注意检查、修改，如果有时间可以先写到草稿纸上，再抄到答题纸上，这样更容易得高分．最后，注意使用一些句型和短语，使整篇文章意思连贯、流畅，方能成就一篇好的作文．
29．There is a new Wanda Plaza Shopping Mall. You want to go there with your friend Monica and buy some clothes for the New Year Party. Please write an email to her.
1. Introduce（介绍） the new mall， including how to go there. （Bus 82， Underground Line 2， …）
2.Tell her about your favourite place in the mall. 3 .Tell her what clothes you want to buy and why. 注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；请适当发挥； 3.词数80左右，邮件开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Monica，
I am very happy to tell you there is a new shopping mall near our school. All the best， Linda
【分析】【高分句型一】
There are all kinds of clothes suitable for students， which give us more choices. 有各种各样适合学生穿的衣服，给了我们更多的选择。定语从句 【高分句型二】
I want to buy a uniform， because the new year is an important festival， wearing a uniform will be more formal.
我想买一套制服，因为新年是一个重要的节日，穿制服会比较正式。want to do sth想做某事
【解答】Dear Monica，
I am very happy to tell you there is a new shopping mall near our school.It's name is Wanda Plaza Shopping Mall.You can get there by Bus 82 or by underground Line 2. In this shopping center， there are all kinds of beautiful clothes. I like the student counter best. There are all kinds of clothes suitable for students， which give us more choices. （喜欢的理由）【高分句型一】I want to buy a uniform， because the new year is an important festival， wearing a uniform will be more formal. （想买什么东西）【高分句型二】What about you？ What do you want to buy？ Come with me.
All the best，
Linda
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
30．
Winter holiday is coming． Some Australian students from your sister school will have a school trip in Nanjing for 10 days． To help these Australian friends enjoy themselves better in Nanjing， you are required to write an email to give them some advice． Your email should include the following： ? what to wear； ? where to go；
? what to do；
注意：词数80左右，短文须包括所有内容要点，适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；开头已给，不计入总词数． Dear friend， I
am
happy
to
know
you
will
come
to
Nanjing
．
It's
winter
now．______________________________．
Yours sincerely， Nanjing Friend
【分析】【高分句型一】
If you are lucky enough， you might get snowy weather．
如果你运气好的话，你可能会遇到下雪的天气．if引导条件状语从句． 【高分句型二】
Then you will see Nanjing city in the snow， which is very beautiful． 然后你会看到雪中的南京，非常漂亮．which引导非限定性定语从句． 【解答】Dear friend，
I am happy to know you will come to Nanjing． It's winter now． It's cold in Nanjing． You should wear warm clothes．（穿衣）There are many places of interest in Nanjing， such as the Nanjing Yangtze river bridge． It is the pride of the Chinese people． I don't think you can miss it．Besides， Nanjing museum is also the place you should go，because you can learn about Chinese history there．（去哪里）Nanjing is an old city with many special snacks．You'll enjoy different kinds of specialty foods． If you are lucky enough，you might get snowy weather．【高分句型一】Then you will see Nanjing city in the snow， which is very beautiful．【高分句型二】（做什么） I hope you'll have a good time． （希望）
Yours sincerely， Nanjing Friend
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
31．假如你叫Linda，今年12岁， 要参加学校正在举办的\"健康形象大使（Health Image Ambassador）．竞选， 请用英语写一篇竞选稿， 内容包括如下信息： Linda Self introduction Diet and lifestyle
Your hobbies
Clothes you like wearing
注意：1．表达中必须包含所给要点并进行适当发挥． 2．词数：90词左右．开头已给出， 不计入总词数， 3．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息，
Hello， everyone． My name is Linda． I'm 12 year old．________________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
I like dancing， reading and playing badminton．
我喜欢跳舞、阅读和打羽毛球．like doing sth喜欢做某事． 【高分句型二】
And I am a member of the school dancing team． 我是学校舞蹈队的一员．be a member of…的一个成员．
【解答】Hello， everyone． My name is Linda． I'm 12 year old． I'm in Class One Grade Seven．（个人信息） I like dancing， reading and playing badminton．【高分句型一】 I am good at dancing． And I am a member of the school dancing team．【高分句型二】（爱好） I need to keep fit， so healthy food is important for me． I often eat fruit and vegetables and seldom eat cakes or sweets． Every morning I get up early． After breakfast I walk to school． I do morning exercises every day． In the afternoon， I often do after﹣school activities with my classmates． Usually I go to bed at about nine o'clock every night．（生活方式） I like wearing the school uniform， because I look smart in it．（喜欢穿什么）
So you see I live a very healthy life． Please vote for me． Thank you！（总结全文） 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
32．假设你是顾华，你的英国网友Sam给你发了一封邮件，想详细了解你在艺术领域方面的喜好．请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据邮件中的内容用英语回复．
To：Guhua@ 163．com From：Sam@yahoo．com Subject：Art Form
Dear Hua，
Glad to hear from you．You said you like art better than sports．I'd like to know more about it．
1．What's your favourite art form？What do you think of it？
2．Who has influenced you most in this area？What can you learn from him/her？ 3．Do you have any problems when you practice it？What have you done with them？ I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
All the best， Sam 注意事项：
1．英文邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2．词数90个左右，邮件的首尾已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数； 3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 4．邮件内容必须写在答题卷的指定位置．
To：Sam@yahoo．com From：Guhua@163．com
Subject：Re：Art Form
Dear Sam，
I'm happy to tell you about my favourite art form．
Do you love art？Write to me soon．
Best wishes， Gu Hua 【分析】【高分句型一】
I think dancing can make me relax．我认为跳舞可以让我放松． I think+宾语从句． make sb+形容词，使某人… 【高分句型二】
At first，it was difficult for me to perform well when I practiced it．起初，当我练习的时候很难表现好．
It is+形容词 for sb to do sth．某人做某事是…的． when引导时间状语从句． 【解答】Dear Sam，
I'm happy to tell you about my favourite art form．（点题）
I like dancing best．I think dancing can make me relax．【高分句型一】We can show our love for life through dancing．Dancing cheers me up when I am blue and calms me down when I am too excited．（我喜欢的艺术形式及我的看法）My favorite dancer is Jin Xing．She is one of the greatest dancers in China．I learned a lot from him．She teaches me what to when I am in trouble．It is the most important to try to achieve your dream．（谁对我影响很大，以及我学到了什么）At first，it was difficult for me to perform well when I practiced it．【高分句型二】But I've made a lot of progress by exercising for two hours every day．（遇到的困难及解决办法）
Do you love art？Write to me soon．
Best wishes， Gu Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
33．寒假期间你们全家去水上公园游玩．请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文参加以\"How to Behave（表现） Politely\"为主题的征文比赛，并适当加以评论．要点提示：
亲身经历
（1）我们玩得正开心，不和谐的一幕发生了；一位女士将垃圾扔在地
上；
（2）我试图阻止，但她拒绝听我的；相反还嘲笑我；
（3）我将垃圾捡起来并扔进垃圾桶；
我的观点
（1）我们应该关注自己的礼仪（manners）；
（2）当在不同场合时我们应该……
注意：（1）征文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； （2）第5点须用2～3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥； （3）词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数． How to Behave Politely
During this Winter Holiday， all my family visited Water Park 【分析】高分句型：
We were enjoying ourselves when something unpleasant happened．当一些不愉快的事情发生时，我们玩得正开心．这里enjoy oneself表示玩的高兴，过的愉快，when引导一个时间状语从句．
I tried to stop her from doing that ，but she refused to listen to me．我试图阻止她做那件事，但她拒绝听我说．这里try to do sth表示试图做某事，stop sb doing sth表示阻止某人做某事，refuse to do sth表示拒绝做某事． 【解答】How to Behave Politely
During this Winter Holiday， all my family visited Water Park．（引出话题） We were enjoying ourselves when something unpleasant happened （高分句型）．A lady threw some litter on the ground．I tried to stop her from doing that ，but she refused to listen to me（高分句型）．Instead ，she laughed at me， I picked it up and threw it into the dustbin．（我的亲身经历）
I think we should pay attention to our manners．When we are in the the library ，we should keep quiet．When we cross the road ，We should watch the traffic lights first． Before we get on a bus ，we should wait in line．（我的观点）
【点评】考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．本文主要针对如何注意自己的言行举止，通过作者在公园遇到的一件事，引发了我们在公众场合怎样关注自己的礼仪，温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．
34．根据中文提示写一篇关于我的好友Amy的文章．
1．她总是面带微笑且随时都愿意帮助人，上周二她帮一位老太太过马路．
2．她爱好广泛．她喜爱看书，经常向图书馆借书，她认为好书即好友；她还爱好旅游，她打算……
3．不仅同学们喜欢她，而且老师们也喜欢她． 注意事项：
1．文章须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2．要点2须用 2﹣3 句适当补充，使内容充实、行文连贯； 3．词数在 90 个左右，文章开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数．
My best friend
Amy is my best friend．______． 【分析】高分句型一
She is ready to help people any time．
此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语be ready to do sth \"准备做某事\"，any time \"随时\"，此句可翻译为\"她随时准备帮助别人．\" 高分句型二
Not only her classmates but also her teachers like her very much．
此句是以not only …but also …（不但…而且…）引起的并列句．运用短语like sb \"喜欢某人\"，短语very much \"非常\"，此句可翻译为\"不仅她的同学，而且她的老师也非常喜欢她．\"
【解答】My best friend
Amy is my best friend．She always has a smile on her face． She is ready to help people any time．（高分句型一） Last Tuesday she helped an old woman cross the road．（要点一，介绍朋友的姓名及乐于助人的好品质．）Amy has many hobbies． She loves reading． She often borrows books from the school library． She thinks good books are good friends． She loves travelling， too． She is going to Beijing visit some places of interest this winter holiday． She finds she can learn a lot from it．（要点二，介绍朋友的爱好及所做的事情．）Not only her classmates but also her teachers like her very much．（高分句型二）（要点三，介绍师生对朋友的好评．）
【点评】本题是提纲作文，写作时能够根据提纲提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
35．澳大利亚此次发生了特大丛林火灾，火势蔓延了四分之一的国土．请认真阅读下列导图，用英文写一篇短文， 贴在 School Newsletter 上．
Big fires
Facts：
●in Australia， in summer， ●hot， dry， less rain； bush fires Results： ●800 buildings ●animals like Koalas ●thick fog … Your feelings： ……
Possible causes： ●humans' activities
●……
注意事项：
1． 短文必须包括以上要点，省略处必须补充细节，做适当发挥； 2． 词数在 80 个左右．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3． 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息； 4． 文章必须写在答题卷对应的位置上，写在试卷其他部分无效． Big fires hit Australia． One quarter of the whole country is on fire．
It's December now but the weather there is ____________________________________． We have only one earth． We should do something to protect our earth． 【分析】【高分句型一】
The forests are so dry that they can catch fire easily on such weather．
森林如此干燥，在这种天气下很容易着火．本句使用了so…that（ 如此……以至于）引导的结果状语从句 【高分句型二】
I feel very sad，although it's a serious natural disaster．
我很难过，尽管这是一场严重的自然灾害．although尽管，虽然，引导让步状语从句． 【解答】Big fires hit Australia． One quarter of the whole country is on fire．
It's December now but the weather there is hot and dry． There's less rain this year than usual． Many bush and forest fires happen． Over 800 buildings fell down． Thousands of Koalas died． There's thick fog everywhere．（描述火灾情况：事实和后果）
Humans' activities mainly lead to these fires． The earth is getting warmer． The forests are so dry that they can catch fire easily on such weather．【高分句型一】（火灾的原因） I feel very sad，although it's a serious natural disaster．（感受） We have only one earth． We should do something to protect our earth．
【点评】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文．它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力．所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数．
36．为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，学校英语校报正在举办以\"How to be good friends\" 为题的征文比赛，请你踊跃投稿．
注意：1．词数80左右．征文的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2．征文须包括以下内容；
*好朋友要善良、有礼貌、乐于帮助有困难的人； *好朋友要愿意和你分享快乐，替你保守秘密；
*好朋友不一定非要有相同的爱好，但一定要对你的学业有帮助； *……（至少写一点自己的观点） 3．可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺．
How to be good friends？
If you want to make good friends with others，be one．But how can we be good friends？ First，_________________________________________________________． I hope all these will be helpful to us． 【分析】【高分句型一】
I think a good friend should be kind and polite．
我认为一个好朋友应该是善良和有礼貌的．I think+宾语从句． 【高分句型二】
Fourth，when you are in trouble，good friends will always be with you．
第四，当你有困难的时候，好朋友会一直和你在一起．when引导时间状语从句． 【解答】How to be good friends？
If you want to make good friends with others，be one，But how can we be good friends？（点题）
First，I think a good friend should be kind and polite．【高分句型一】He or she should be ready to help others when are in need．（好朋友要善良、有礼貌、乐于帮助有困难的人） Second，good friends should be willing to share their joy with you．And they can keep secrets for you．（好朋友要愿意和你分享快乐，替你保守秘密）Third，good friends don't have to share the same hobby，but they should be able to help you with your lessons．（好朋友不一定非要有相同的爱好，但一定要对你的学业有帮助） Fourth，when you are in trouble，good friends will always be with you．【高分句型二】（遇到困境，好朋友不离不弃） I hope all these will be helpful to us．（希望）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
37．题目①
假如你是李华，你们学校的健身俱乐部要举办一场健身经验分享活动，你打算邀请你们班交换生 Peter 参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动的时间和地点、活动安排，以及他需要做什么准备。
提示词语：fit，share，invite，experience，question 提示问题：● When and where will you have the activity？ ● What will you do？
● What do you advise Peter to prepare for it？
Dear Peter， How is it going？
There 'll be an activity on\"How to Keep Fit\"in our school.__________. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours， Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
I'd like to invite you to take part in the fitness experience sharing activities in our school health club at 14：30 next Monday.我想邀请您参加下周一14：30我们学校健身俱乐部的健身经验分享活动。
would like to do sth想做某事。 【高分句型二】
I suggest you get some knowledge about fitness first.我建议你先了解一下健身知识。 I suggest+宾语从句。 【解答】Dear Peter， How is it going？
There 'll be an activity on\"How to Keep Fit\"in our school.I'd like to invite you to take part in the fitness experience sharing activities in our school health club at 14：30 next Monday.【高分句型一】（时间和地点）It is the most popular event liked by everyone.（做什么）To hold it successfully，we have done a lot of preparations.For example，we will invite some fitness experts to give a lecture.What's more，I will be the host of the event.I suggest you get some knowledge about fitness first.【高分句型二】（建议） I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours， Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
38．假如你是李俊，你的美国朋友David想在中国认识更多的朋友．你通过电子邮件，把你最好的朋友王浩介绍给他．请你结合以下要点，完成该邮件．
年龄、外貌 个性 爱好 其他情况 理想
15岁，方脸，高个子 慷慨、乐于助人，…（自拟1点） 痴迷于DIY，上周…（自拟1点）
对了解不同种类的鸟类感兴趣，是观鸟协会的成员；
最喜欢冬季，因为他喜欢…（自拟2点）
长大后周游世界
注意：1．词数90左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数． 2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Dear David，
How are you？I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Hao to you． He is 15 years old．He is tall and has a square face．
Wang Hao is generous and helpful．He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy．He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends．He never says a bad word about others．
He is crazy about DIY．It was my birthday last week．He made a birthday card for me．He is interested in learning about different kinds of birds and now he is a member of the Bird watching Society．Among/Of the four seasons，he likes winter best because he likes making snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends．
He likes traveling．So he wants to travel round the world when he grows up．
I hope you can make friends with him．Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival． Best wishes． yours， Li Jun
【分析】高分句型：
So he wants to ravel round the world when he grows up．所以他长大后想周游世界．这里want to do sth表示想做某事．
I hope you can make friends with him．我希望你能和他交朋友．这里hope后面跟的是一个宾语从句．
【解答】Dear David，
How are you？I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Hao to you． （引出话题） He is 15 years old．He is tall and has a square face．（年龄，外貌）
Wang Hao is generous and helpful．He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy．He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends．He never says a bad word about others．
（个性）He is crazy about DIY．It was my birthday last week．He made a birthday card for me． （爱好）He is interested in learning about different kinds of birds and now he is a member of the Bird watching Society．Among/Of the four seasons，he likes winter best because he likes making snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends．（其他情况）
He likes traveling．So he wants to travel round the world when he grows up（高分句型）．（理想）
I hope you can make friends with him．（高分句型） Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival．（希望） Best wishes． yours， Li Jun
【点评】这是一篇话题作文，作文题目已经给出，而且列出了要求．写作文时要仔细审题，每一条都要写到，注意前后句的连接，不要遗漏要点，必要时可适当发挥．
39．假定你是李华，上个星期你的英国笔友Daniel给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你的家庭作业的情况，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复． To：Lihua@ china．com
From：Daniel@ britain．com Subject：My homework Dear Lihua
I hear that Chinese students work hard and always have too much homework．Is that true？Would you please tell me something about your homework？ ●How do you like your homework？And why？
●How much time do you spend on your homework every day？What homework do you do usually？
●What homework once impressed you most？And why？ ● What is your ideal homework？And why？ All the best， Daniel
注意：1．词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Dear Daniel，
Thank you so much for your email．I'm very happy to tell you something about my homework． I think homework is of great importance to/for a student because homework is a good way to check or test what I have learned． /I can go over my lessons by doing different kinds of homework．I usually spend about more than two hours on my homework of different subjects，such as Chinese，Maths，English，Chemistry．I remember I spent two hours working together with my classmates to finish an English project．The special homework made me learn about teamwork．I also come to know everyone has their own advantage．I think the best homework is what can make me not only learn but also think．
What about your homework？Is it interesting or boring？I am looking forward to your reply． Best wishes， Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think homework is of great importance for a student because homework is a good way to check or test what I have learned．我认为家庭作业对学生来说是非常重要的，因为家庭作业是检查或测试我所学到的东西的好方法．
I think+宾语从句；be of great importance 非常重要；because引导原因状语从句；a good way to do sth做某事的好方法；what 引导宾语从句 【高分句型二】
I can go over my lessons by doing different kinds of homework．我可以通过做不同种类的家庭作业来复习功课． by doing sth通过做某事． 【解答】Dear Daniel，
Thank you so much for your email．I'm very happy to tell you something about my
homework．（引起下文）
I think homework is of great importance for a student because homework is a good way to check or test what I have learned．【高分句型一】I can go over my lessons by doing different kinds of homework．【高分句型二】I usually spend about more than two hours on my homework of different subjects，such as Chinese，Maths，English，Chemistry．I remember I spent two hours working together with my classmates to finish an English project．The special homework made me learn about teamwork．I also come to know everyone has their own advantage．I think the best homework is what can make me not only learn but also think．（我的作业情况及学习经验）
What about your homework？Is it interesting or boring？I am looking forward to your reply．（期待回信） Best wishes， Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
40．假如你校有几位来自美国的交换生，他们打算周末步行去翠湖公园．请根据提示为他们出前往的线路，并简介公园情况． 要点提示： 1．路线（见图）
2．公园环境优美、凉爽，还可以游泳、野餐等； 3…
要求：
1．词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数． 2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称．
Cuihu Park is not far from here．It's easy to get there．Just go straight 【分析】略
【解答】Cuihu Park is nor far from here．It's easy to get there．Just go straight and turn right at the first corner．Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital．
Cuihu Park is down the street on your right．Across from the park is a restaurant．The park is really a good place to have fun．It's beautiful and cool with many trees and flowers．You can swim，play games or have a picnic there．It's very relaxing．You may also get a good chance to practice Chinese．I hope you will enjoy yourselves． 【点评】略
41．3月22日是世界水日。水在我们的生活中扮演着重要角色。我国及世界很多地区存在缺水现象。请以\"Saving water\"为题写一篇英语短文。 内容包括以下要点： （1）水资源的重要性； （2）水资源现状及原因； （3）节约用水的举措。 注意：
（1）词数90左右；
（2）包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； （3）文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇：短缺 be short of
【分析】【高分句型一】
But some people don't seem to care about it.但有些人似乎不关心它。句子中seem to do sth表示似乎要做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式形式。 【高分句型二】
If we don't save water，the last drop of water will be a tear﹣drop.如果我们不节约用水，最后一滴水就是我们的眼泪。句子中if引导一个条件状语从句，主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时的。
【解答】Water is very important to humans.We can't live without water（水的重要性）．The amount of water suitable to drink is falling.But some people don't seem to care about it.【高分句型一】They waste a lot of water.（大量的水被浪费）They pour dirty water into rivers and pollute them.They throw rubbish into them，too.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.（环境遭到污染）So we must do something to stop the pollution.we must protect the water as well as find ways to reuse it （采取措施节约用水）．If we don't save water，the last drop of water will be a tear﹣drop．【高分句型二】（浪费水出现的后果）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥
的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
42．假如你校将开展\"读好书，促成长\"活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，向全校同学发出 倡议．请参考表格内容，用英语写一份倡议书．
读书的意义
1获取知识，开阔视野：2．使人愉悦，益于学习；3．……（自由发
挥）
现状 倡议
1作业多，无良好读书习惯；2．电视和网络占时多．
……（至少两点）
注意：1．词数90左右．短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Dear friends，
Reading is very important in our daily life． Let's start reading now! 【分析】【高分句型一】
However，there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don't have enough time for reading．然而，通常有太多的作业要做，我们没有足够的时间阅读． so…that…如此…以至于… 【高分句型二】
We must spend more time reading some useful books．我们必须花更多的时间读一些有用的书．
spend…doing sth花费…做某事． 【解答】Dear friends，
Reading is very important in our daily life．（点题）
First of all，reading can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books．It can also help to open up a whole new world to us．Second，reading can make us clever and happy．It is good for our study and it can help us grow up．Third，reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful．（读书的意义）
However，there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don't have enough time for reading． 【高分句型一】Moreover，some of us don't have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet．（现状）
In my opinion，our school can have a \"Reading Week\" once a term．Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library．We must spend more time reading some useful books．【高分句型二】As a result，we can have a better future．（倡议） Let's start reading now!
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
43．假如你是学校的小记者，日前对学校\"最美志愿者\"Amy进行了采访．请根据以下采访
记录，用英语写一篇稿件，向读者介绍她的情况．
兴趣爱好 感人事迹
1．读书．每天约花一小时阅读． 2．旅游．去过中国西部地区． 1．贫困学生患重病，为其集资做手术． 2．发现女童辍学，联系政府帮助其复学．
未来计划
1．今年暑假：宣传环境保护，因为…（原因自拟）．
2．以后有机会时：…（内容自拟）
注意：1．词数90词左右．短文开头已写好，不计入总词数．
2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺． 3．短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
Amy was presented the Most Beautiful Young Volunteer in our school． She likes reading．When she was young，she read the four great classical Chinese novels．And she likes travelling，too．She has visited many places in the west of our country．This helped her learn more about the country．
Amy organized several activities to raise money fora boy from a poor family．The boy got a serious disease．With Amy's support，the boy was cured after the operation．Last year，she found a girl had to leave school，she wrote to the local government and helped the girl return to school． This summer，she decides to tell people to protect the environment because she finds the environment is changing for the worse．If possible，she may take part in some charities to work for more people．
She says she doesn't have as much spare time as before，but her life is more meaningful． ． 【分析】【高分句型一】
When she was young，she read the four great classical Chinese novels．当她小的时候，她读中国四大古典小说． when引导时间状语从句． 【高分句型二】
This summer，she decides to tell people to protect the environment because she finds the environment is changing for the worse．今年夏天，她决定告诉人们保护环境，因为她发现环境开始恶化．
decide to do sth开始做某事；because引导原因状语从句．
【解答】Amy was presented the Most Beautiful Young Volunteer in our school．She likes reading．She spends an hour reading books every day．When she was young，she read the four great classical Chinese novels． 【高分句型一】And she likes travelling，too．She has visited many places in the west of our country．This helped her learn more about the country．（兴趣爱好）
Amy organized several activities to raise money for a boy from a poor family．The boy got a serious disease．With Amy's support，the boy was cured after the operation．Last year，she found a girl had to leave school，she wrote to the local government and helped the girl return to
school．（感人事迹）
This summer，she decides to tell people to protect the environment because she finds the environment is changing for the worse．【高分句型二】If possible，she may take part in some charities to work for more people．（未来计划）
She says she doesn't have as much spare time as before，but her life is more meaningful．（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
44．根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件．邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．所给提示词仅供选用．
注意：请不要写出你的校名和姓名，请不要抄写本试卷文章中的原句．
假设你叫李华，最近和自己的英国朋友Peter在谈论各自敬佩的人物，他在上封邮件中向你介绍了自己所敬佩的一位作家，他希望你也能向他介绍一位自己所敬佩的人．请根据他提出的以下问题给他回复一封邮件．
参考词汇：work hard；kind；helpful；responsible；role model
Who do you admire？（a writer/a sports player/your parent/your classmate/…） What does/did he/she do？ Why do you admire him/her？ Hi!Peter，
Thanks for telling me about J．K．Rowling．She is really a great writer!
One of the people I admire a lot is my father．He is a history teacher at a middle school．He loves his job and works very hard．To make his students interested in history，he makes a lot of efforts to prepare each lesson．He is also patient and helpful to his students．
As for me，he is not only my father but also a good friend．Whenever I have problems，he is the first person who offers me advice and encouragement．My father is my role model．He has taught me to be kind，hardworking and responsible．
Yours， Li Hua．
【分析】【高分句型一】
One of the people I admire a lot is my father．（我最敬佩的人物之一是我的父亲） I admire是定语从句，修饰people，省略了who． 【高分句型二】
Whenever I have problems，he is the first person who offers me advice and encouragement．（每当我遇到问题时，他都是第一个给我建议和鼓励的人） whenever引导的时间状语从句．其中who引导的定语从句，修饰person． 【解答】Hi!Peter，
Thanks for telling me about J．K．Rowling．She is really a great writer!
One of the people I admire a lot is my father．【高分句型一】（我崇拜的人）He is a
history teacher at a middle school．（他的职业）He loves his job and works very hard．To make his students interested in history，he makes a lot of efforts to prepare each lesson．He is also patient and helpful to his students．
As for me，he is not only my father but also a good friend．Whenever I have problems，he is the first person who offers me advice and encouragement．【高分句型二】
My father is my role model．He has taught me to be kind，hardworking and responsible．（为什么） Yours， Li Hua
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
45．题目1
你校正在开展\"光盘行动（Empty Plate Campaign）\"主题活动。假如你 是李华，请你为学校英语广播站写一篇广播稿，谈谈杜绝浪费粮食的意义 以及同学们为此能做些什么。 提示词语： save， produce9 menu， ask for， poster
提示问题：? Why should we stop wasting food？ ? What can we do to stop wasting food？ Good morning，everyone. Our school is starting an Empty Plate Campaign to fight against food waste. .
Please start with ourselves now and we can make a difference. Thank you 【分析】【高分句型一】
I hope we all take an active part in this meaningful campaign.我希望我们都能积极参与这个有意义的运动。 I hope+宾语从句。
take an active part in 积极参加。 【高分句型二】
By eating up the food on plates， we can not only save food and money but also produce less waste.通过吃完盘子上的食物，我们不仅可以节省食物和钱，而且产生更少的浪费。 by doing sth通过做某事。
not only…but also…不仅……而且……
【解答】Good morning，everyone. Our school is starting an Empty Plate Campaign to fight against food waste.（点题） I hope we all take an active part in this meaningful campaign.【高分句型一】 By eating up the food on plates， we can not only save food and money but also produce less waste. 【高分句型二】To stop wasting food， we can find out what food students like most and help our school to improve the menu. At lunch， don't ask for more food than you can eat. We can also put up posters to spread the idea of saving food.（做饭） Please start with ourselves now and we can make a difference.（呼吁） Thank you
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和
句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
46．从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作．文中已给出内容不计入总词数．所给提示词语仅供选用．请不要写出你的校名和姓名． 题目①
假如你是李华，是你校学生英语俱乐部的负责人．俱乐部要举办一次关于如何学好英语的微讲座（micro lecture）．请你给你校外教Peter发一封邮件，邀请他录制微讲座，向他说明举办本次讲座活动的目的，你建议讲座谈论的内容以及发送讲座视频给你的时间． 提示词语：difficult，make progress，advice，remember new words，reading 提示问题：●Why do you hold this activity？ ●What do you advise Peter to talk about in the lecture？ ●When would you like Peter to send you the video？ Dear Peter，
I'm writing to invite you to record a micro lecture on how to learn English well． ． Thank you !
If there is anything more that you want to know，please tell me．
Yours， Li Hua
【分析】[高分句型一]
We are all looking forward to it since Western culture always fascinates us．我们都很期待，因为西方文化总是让我们着迷．
此处是由连词\"since \"引导的原因状语从句，主句为\"We are all looking forward to it\"． [高分句型二]
We shall be more than pleased if you could honor us with your micro lecture video．如果您能为我们提供一次微型讲座的视频，我们将非常高兴．
此处为连词\"if\"引导的条件状语从句，主句为\"We shall be more than pleased\"． 【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm writing to invite you to record a micro lecture on how to learn English well．（写信目的） We have difficulty in remembering new words．we also want to know how to improve their reading ability．Therefore，we hope you can give more suggestions in these two aspects in the lecture．（微讲座内容） We are all looking forward to it since Western culture always fascinates us． [高分句型一]
Could you please send the micro lecture to us this Saturday？We shall be more than pleased if you could honor us with your micro lecture．[高分句型二] Your early reply will be greatly appreciated．（期待对方回应） Thank you !
If there is anything more that you want to know，please tell me．
【点评】在写作时要求能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
47．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
你校英语俱乐部正在开展以\" My primary school life\"为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的小学生活及你的感受。 提示词语：beautiful，nice，learn，draw，play，wonderful 提示问题：● What was your primary school like？ ●What were your teachers like？
●What did you like doing in your primary school？ ●How do you feel about your primary school life？ My primary school life I studied in_____________. 【分析】【高分句型一】：
I loved learning math and English.我喜欢学习数学和英语。句子中love doing sth表示喜欢做某事。
【高分句型二】：
I think my primary school life is wonderful.我觉得我的小学生活很美好。句子中think后面跟的是一个宾语从句。 【解答】
My primary school life
I studied in Guang Ming Primary School in 2012.（引出话题）The school was beautiful with a big teaching building and a playground.My teachers were very nice and friendly to us，but sometimes they were strict.I loved learning math and English.【高分句型一】I also enjoyed drawing pictures in the drawing club.And I liked playing football in the playground with my classmates most.（具体介绍小学生活）I think my primary school life is wonderful.【高分句型二】（感受）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕表格内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
48．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作．文中已给出内容不计入总词数．所给提示词语仅供选用．请不要写出你的校名和姓名．
在学校的学习及实践活动中，你了解了很多北京的旅游景点．如故宫（the Palace Museum）、首都博物馆（the Capital Museum）、老舍茶馆（Lao She Teahouse）等． 假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Tony近期要到北京旅游．请你给他写一封邮件，告诉他北京近期的天气状况，给他推荐一个北京的旅游地点，简单介绍你推荐的理由，并告诉他应该做些什么准备．
提示词语：cold， famous， the Beijing Opera， warm clothes
提示问题：●What's the weather like in Beijing？ ●Which place do you advise him to visit and why？ ●What does he need to prepare？ Dear Tony，
I am very glad that you're coming to Beijing．
I'm looking forward to seeing you in Beijing．
Yours， Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
The Beijing Opera is one of the most famous traditional culture．京剧是最著名的传统文化之一．
one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数，表示最…之一 【高分句型二】
You'd better bring a camera with you．你最好带上相机． had better do sth最好做某事． 【解答】Dear Tony，
Welcome to Beijing．Beijing is one of the most famous cities in the world．It has many places of interest， such as the Palace Museum，the Capital Museum， Lao She Teahouse and so on．Beijing also has a lot of traditional culture． The Beijing Opera is one of the most famous traditional culture．【高分句型一】I hope you don't miss it．（名胜古迹和传统文化）Besides， the weather in Beijing is cold． You should wear warm clothes．（天气）I think the Great Wall is the place you must visit， because it is one of the great wonders in the world．（建议爬长城）You'd better bring a camera with you．【高分句型二】 You can take many beautiful pictures．（需要准备什么）
I'm looking forward to seeing you in Beijing．（期待）
Yours， Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
49．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的 文段写作．文中已给出内容不计入总词数．所给提示词语仅供选用．请不 要写出你的校名和姓名．
培养独立自主的生活能力对中学生非常重要．独立自主的生活能力包括自 主安排时间、自觉完成作业、自己整理房间、做饭等．
某英文网站正在开展以\"培养独立自主的生活能力\"为主题的征文活动．假 如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在生活中能独立自主做哪些事 情，还需要在哪些方面改进．
提示词语：manage time，waste，tidy up，learn
提示问题：What can you do independently in your daily life？ What do you need to improve？
It's very important for teenagers to learn to do things independently． 【分析】高分句型一：
I think everyone should be responsible for themselves so that we can develop a good sense of responsibility when we grow up．be responsible for 对…负责．a good sense of responsibility一种责任意识．
这句话意为：我认为每一个人都应该对他们自己负责，以便于我们长大后能发展一种责任意识． 高分句型二：
I can do chores to help my parents ，such as tiding up our rooms，washing clothes，do dishes and so on．such as比如，and so on等等．
这句话意为：我会帮我父母做家务，比如整理房间，洗衣服，洗盘子等等．
【解答】It's very important for teenagers to learn to do things independently．I think everyone should be responsible for themselves so that we can develop a good sense of responsibility when we grow up（高分句型一）．let me tell you something about myself．（开篇点明主题） Firstly，I can do chores to help my parents ，such as tiding up our rooms，washing clothes，doing dishes and so on（高分句型二）．I think it also can strengthen our relationship with our parents．Secondly，I can manage my time well in my daily life，I know the things I should to do in different time．Meanwhile，I should improve myself from some aspects．I sometimes waste some water when I do chores．of course，learning is a long process during our lifetime．I will go on to learn．（从两个方面说明自己会做的事情以及需要改善的方面）
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
50．最近你班学生以\"假期该出去旅游还是待在家里？\"为题做了一个调查．调查发现一些学生赞成出去旅游，还有一些学生认为应该待在家里．请你根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍这次调查情况并发表你的观点．
观 点 出去旅游 待在家里 你的观点
理 由
可增长见识；可放松身心
参加网络学习；完成学校作业；帮父母做家务
理由（自拟1﹣2点）
注意：1．词数90左右，短文的开头已经写好，不计入总词数；
2．短文须包括所有要点，不要遂词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
Going out for a trip or staying at home？
Going out for a trip or staying at home during the holidays，which is better？Students in our
class have different ideas．
Some students think__________________________________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
A trip can not only relax ourselves but also give us a good understanding of nature and society，旅行不仅能让我们放松，而且能让我们更好地了解自然和社会． not only…but also…不但……而且…… 【高分句型二】
On the other hand，our parents are very busy with their work，so we need to help them do more housework during the holidays．另一方面，我们的父母工作很忙，所以我们需要在假期帮助他们做更多的家务． be busy with sth 忙于某事．
【解答】Going out for a trip or staying at home？
Going out for a trip or staying at home during the holidays，which is better？Students in our class have different ideas．
Some students think that they should go out for a trip．A trip can increase their knowledge，broaden their horizons and relax their body and mind．What's more，they may make new friends during the trip．（出去旅游的好处） But others think they should stay at home，they should learn online and finish their homework．They also help their parents do some housework．（待在家里的理由）
I think we should go out for a trip．A trip can not only relax ourselves but also give us a good understanding of nature and society．【高分句型一】But at the same time，I think we should also arrange our study reasonably and finish our homework well．（我的观点）On the other hand，our parents are very busy with their work，so we need to help them do more housework during the holidays．【高分句型二】Helping them can not only make them happy but also make us learn some life skills．
【点评】在写作时要求能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
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