初中英语作文题目及范文解读
1．假如你是一位名叫李华的中学生，请阅读你的美国笔友Jim的邮件并给予回复。 To：Li Hua From：Jim Dear Li Hua，
How are you？I hope everything is OK with you.Spring Festival is coming soon.I am interested in it.Can you tell me something about it？When is it？How do people celebrate？Is there any traditional food？Can you make these dishes？ Thank you!
要求：1.邮件必须包含Jim邮件中的要点问题，并可适当增加，使行文连贯； 2.邮件不得使用真实的人名，校名；
3.词数80左右，邮件开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）。 Dear Jim，
Thanks for your last email. . Best wished!
Yours， Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
The Spring Festival is to Chinese people what Christmas is to you.春节对中国人来说就像圣诞节对你一样。 what引导表语从句。 【高分句型二】
I sincerely invite you to join us this year.我诚挚地邀请您在今年加入我们。 invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事。 【解答】Dear Jim，
Thanks for your last email.I am very glad to know you are interested in the Spring Festival of China. （写信目的）
The Spring Festival is to Chinese people what Christmas is to you. （春节的意义）【高分句型一】It falls on the first day of lunar new year. （时间）Most of us will try our best to return home for a family reunion.On New Year's Day，we always put on our new clothes and visit our friends.On the New Year Eve，we will enjoy different kinds of food，especially Jiaozi and Tangyuan，meaning good luck. 【高分句型二】I can also make these dishes.Besides，we will appreciate beautiful fireworks.（如何庆祝以及美食）
I sincerely invite you to join us this year. 【高分句型二】I'm sure you will have an unforgettable experience.（欢迎来中国） Best wished!
Yours， Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
2．下面是一份关于九年级学生语文课外阅读情况的问卷调查表，每个调查项目之后有几个选项，请将符合自己实际情况的选项打\"⋅\"（除前两个项目外，其他均可多选）．然后，根据你的选择，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍自己的语文课外阅读情况，并谈谈你的想法．
课文课外阅读问卷调查表
调查项目 （1）阅读兴趣 （2）阅读时间
选项
A．喜欢 B．有点喜欢 C．不喜欢 A．每天阅读 B．有时阅读 C．很少阅读
D．完全不读
（3）阅读内容
A．小说 B．散文 C．诗歌
D．其他
（4）阅读目的
A．提高语文水平 B．增加知识 C．休闲娱乐
D．其他
（5）阅读书籍
A．自己选择 B．父母购买 C．教师指定
D．其他
（6）影响阅读的因素 注意： ①无须写标题；
A．学习压力太大 B．教师没有要求 C．没有书籍可
读 D．其他
②内容必须包含调查表中6个项目，以及关于课外阅读的想法； ③文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名； ④词数为80左右．
参考词汇：fiction小说；essay散文．
【分析】这是一份给材料作文．首先要根据自己的情况填写一份关于九年级学生语文课外阅读情况的问卷调查表，然后根据自己的选择，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍自己的语文课外阅读情况，并谈谈自己的想法．要用第一人称，一般现在时态．文中可加however、so等连词，可使文章更通顺． 【解答】参考范文1
I like reading very much．I always do some reading in my free time．My favorite books are fictions．On weekends，I often go to the bookstore to buy what I like．My parents buy some books for me as gifts．I think reading is very interesting and helpful．It not only makes me relaxed but also improves my Chinese，especially my writing．However，as students of Grade Nine，we are under great pressure of study，and now it's nearly impossible for us to do some reading after class．So I hope Chinese teachers will give us more time to read．I believe the more we read，the better we'll do in exams． 短文写作参考范文2
I like reading a little．Sometimes I do some reading just for fun．I enjoy cartoons better than any other kinds of books because they are very interesting．At times I go to the bookstore to buy cartoons，and I also borrow some from my friends．Our teachers are always telling us that reading is important and we can learn a lot by reading．But I'm not interested in the books that our Chinese teacher asks us to read，such as fictions，essays and some science books．I hope she can choose some more interesting books for us．Maybe that will make me like reading．As we all know，interest is the best teacher．
【点评】书面表达要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容．在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题．审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等．
3．请根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于40词的文段写作．文中已给出内容不计入总词数．所给提示词语仅供选用．请不要写出你的校名和姓名．
2020年的春天，我们似乎穿越到未来，体验了一种全新的居家线上学习方式．我们可以自主规划学习生活，也有更多时间做自己感兴趣的事情．
某英文网站正在开展以\"居家学习生活\"为主题的征文活动．请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍在此期间你做了哪些有意思的事情，以及你的感受．
提示词语：read，watch movies，cook，learn calligraphy（书法），do exercise，happy 提示问题：●What did you do？ ●How did you feel？
This spring，I studied online at home． ________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
I spend an hour reading my favorite books every day．我每天花费一个小时读我最喜欢的书． spend…doing sth花费…做某事． 【高分句型二】
I couldn't go to school，but I felt happy．虽然我不能去上学，但我感到高兴． but表示转折．
【解答】This spring，I studied online at home．I also had more time to do some interesting things．In my free time，I watched movies and learned calligraphy．Sometimes，I cooked food for my parents．I did exercise every morning to keep healthy．I spend an hour reading my favorite books every day． 【高分句型一】I learned a lot from the books．（做什么） I couldn't go to school，but I felt happy．【高分句型二】（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
4．请根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于40词的文段写作。文中已给出内容，不计入总词数。所给图片及提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike对中国传统节日如春节（Spring Festival） 和中秋节（Mid﹣Autumn Festival）等非常感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件，介绍你最喜欢的中国传统节日。内容包括：你最喜欢的中国节日是什么，节日期间你通常会做哪些事情，以及你喜欢这个节日的理由。 提示问题：
•What's your favorite Chinese festival？ •What do you usually do at the festival？ •Why is it your favourite festival？
Dear Mike， How is it going？
I would like to tell you about my favorite Chinese festival. . If you want to know more，please tell me.
Yours， Li Hua 【分析】【高分句型一】
I'm very glad to tell you something about Spring Festival.我很高兴告诉你一些关于春节的事情。
be glad to do sth高兴做某事。 【高分句型二】
I always help my mother clean the windows and wash the clothes.我总是帮助我的妈妈擦窗户和洗衣服。
help sb do sth帮助某人做某事。 【解答】Dear Mike， How is it going？
I would like to tell you about my favorite Chinese festival.（点题）
My favorite Chinese festival is Spring Festival. （最喜欢春节）It's a traditional festival in
China.It usually comes on January 1st every year.We usually clean our house carefully before it comes.I always help my mother clean the windows and wash the clothes.【高分句型二】I can get a hongbao from my parents.We put on Spring Festival couplets on the door.On the eve of the Spring Festival，we get together to have a family dinner.The next morning，we visit our relatives and friends and say \"Happy New Year\" to each other.（如何过春节） If you want to know more，please tell me.
Yours， Li Hua 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
5．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于 50 词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。
假如你是初二学生李华，你的英国朋友 Chris 想要了解北京。请你介绍一下北京这座城市。可以从北京的天气、著名景点、文化、交通等方面中选择至少两点进行介绍。 提示词语：season， famous， visit， beautiful， culture
【分析】【高分句型一】
It has four distinct seasons，which have different characteristics.它有四个不同的季节，有不同的特点。
which引导定语从句。 【高分句型二】
There are many places of interest in Beijing， such as the Great Wall， the Summer Palace， the Imperial Palace and so on.北京有许多名胜古迹，如长城、颐和园、故宫等。 such as例如…… 【解答】
Beijing City
Beijing is the capital of China. It has four distinct seasons，which have different characteristics.
【高分句型一】（季节）There are many places of interest for you to visit in Beijing， such as the Great Wall， the Summer Palace， the Imperial Palace and so on.【高分句型二】（景点）Beijing Opera is a very famous traditional culture.（文化）The subway in Beijing is the most convenient way to get around.（交通） Welcome to Beijing.（表示欢迎）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
6．假如你是八中学生王凯，你在国际部公告栏中看到了一则招募寄宿家庭（host family）的信息，你很感兴趣．请你根据招募要求写一份邮件． Host Families Wanted
Twenty students from Lyndon School，USA are coming for a one﹣month study．They need 20 host families．
Do you want to be a host family？If so，introduce yourself，your family，your hobbies．If you're interested in it，e﹣mail the information to Lyndonschool @ gmail．com．
Student Union
No Middle School
要求：1．邮件中不能出现真实姓名等相关信息；2．不少于70词． To：Lyndon School Subject：A host family for you Dear American friends， ___________．
Yours， Wang Kai
【分析】【高分句型一】
It is big enough to hold one more person．
它足够大，可以多容纳一个人．It is +形容词+to do sth足够…做某事． 【高分句型二】
I am looking forward to your reply． 期待您的回复．look forward to…期待… 【解答】To：Lyndon School Subject：A host family for you Dear American friends，
My name is Wang Kai．I'm a boy．I'm sixteen．I am in Class One，Junior One．I am outgoing．I like singing and dancing．I like making friends and English is my favorite subject．（介绍自己） There are three people in my family．They are my parents and me．My father is a teacher and my mother is a doctor．My parents are very friendly and helpful．There
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are three bedrooms in my house．It is big enough to hold one more person．【高分句型一】（介绍家庭） So I want to apply to become one of the host families．I am looking forward to your reply．【高分句型二】（期待） Yours， Wang Kai
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
7．假如你是李华，你收到美国笔友Peter 的邮件，请你阅读后回复，词数80左右。 To： Li Hua From： Peter Dear Li Hua，
How are you？ The year of 2020 has come to an end. Happy New Year to you! In 2020， we have experienced a lot. Would you like to share one thing which made you happy or sad？ When and where did it happen？ How did it make you feel？ What did you learn from the experience？
Looking forward to your reply. Peter
To： Peter From： Li Hua Dear Peter，
. Yours， Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
Last summer vacation， on my way home I met two American friends who lost their way. 暑假期间，在回家的路上，我遇到两个迷路的美国朋友。 who引导定语从句。 【高分句型二】
Although it was late when I got home that day，I was very happy.虽然那天我到家很晚，但我很高兴。
although引导让步状语从句。 【解答】Dear Peter，
I am very glad to receive the E﹣mail. Happy new year to you! I am OK now.I am happy to share one thing that made me happy in 2020. （点题）
Last summer vacation， on my way home I met two American friends who lost their way. 【高分句型一】They looked worried while they were looking for the hotel where they stayed. As I know that hotel，I decided to help them and took them there. On the road，we talked a lot. I told them
about the great changes in our hometown，such as the more convenient transportation，the fresher air and so on.（分享经历）
Although it was late when I got home that day，I was very happy. 【高分句型二】Because I not only helped foreign friends，but also realized the importance of learning English well.（感受） Yours， Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
8．假如你是李涛，在美国夏令营活动中，你和来自不同国家的中学生交流了各自的职业梦想．现校刊向你约稿，请根据表格信息，给校刊主编回信．
name David（U．K．） Helen（ U．S．A）
Li Tao
注意：1．内容必须包括表格中的信息； 2．开头已经为你写好，你只需接着写；
3．词数：70个左右．开头和结尾部分的内容不计入总词汇． Dear Editor，
I am writing to tell you about our dreams． ． Looking forward to your reply． Yours， Li Tao．
【分析】这是一篇图表作文．内容是介绍一下你和你的朋友David、Helen的职业梦想．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1．David（U．K．）；艺术家；原因：有创造性，喜欢绘画
2．Helen（ U．S．A）；商店售货员；原因：试穿新衣服，遇见不同的朋友 3．李涛的梦想和理由 常用到的重点短语： want to be 想成为 make+sth+adj 让某某怎样 try on 试穿 come from 来自
make sb do sth 让某人做某事
what artist shop assistant
…
why 1．creative 2．love painting 1．try on new clothes 2．meet different people
1．… 2．…．
【高分句型】
1．David①from U．K．②wants to be an artist ③because he loves painting and④it's creative to⑤make the city more beautiful． ①介词短语做后置定语修饰David． ②want to be 想成为
③because引导的原因状语从句．
④it作为形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语． ⑤make+sth+adj 让某某怎样
2．She ①would like to be a shop assistant ②because she will enjoy the life③if she can often try on new clothes and meet different people． ①would like to be 想成为 ②because引导的原因状语从句．
③if引导的条件状语从句．遵循主将从现的规则．
3．I like playing computer games and ①doing programs can②make me feel③how smart I am． ①动名词短语做主语． ②make sb do sth 让某人做某事 ③how smart I am作为feel的宾语从句． 【解答】Dear Editor，
I am writing to tell you about our dreams．
David from U．K．wants to be an artist because he loves painting and it's creative to make the city more beautiful．【高分句型】（David（U．K．）；艺术家；有创造性，喜欢绘画）As for the American girl Helen，she has a very special dream．She would like to be a shop assistant because she will enjoy the life if she can often try on new clothes and meet different people．【高分句型】（Helen（ U．S．A）；商店售货员；试穿新衣服，遇见不同的朋友）
I come from China and I want to work as a programmer．I like playing computer games and doing programs can make me feel how smart I am．【高分句型】（我来自中国，程序员，喜欢电脑游戏）
Looking forward to your reply． Yours， Li Tao
【点评】此类作文首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题．写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误．只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数．另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依
9．请以\"My Best Friend and I\"为题写一篇短文，说说你们的外貌，性格，爱好等，80词左右。
. 【分析】【高分句型一】
We both like reading.我们都喜欢读书 like doing sth表示喜欢做某事。 【高分句型二】
I want to be a doctor.我想成为一名医生。 句子中want to do sth表示想做某事。
【解答】Linda is my best friend. We are the same in some ways， but we are different in some ways. （点题）We both have black eyes and black hair. She is taller than me. And she is more serious than me. I am more outing and funnier than her.We both like reading. 【高分句型一】She likes talk shows， but I like game shows.She wants to be a writer. I want to be a doctor.【高分句型二】（从各个方面介绍我们俩）
We often help each other and we are good friends.（总结全文）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
10．仔细观察图中乘客在公交车上的举止，参考所提供的短语写一篇短文．
talk loudly on the phone，smoke on the bus，drop litter，stand close to each other，be not allowed，feel uncomfortable，It is better to…，social behavior，…
提示：
1．短文内容包括对图中乘客在公交车上的举止描述和你的建议四条． 2．词数80个左右．短文开头已写好，不计入总词数． 3．文中不得出现学校和个人的相关信息．
Impolite manners can be seen in public places quite often．Here is a situation from a No.56 bus．A man with a handbag on his knees （膝盖）is talking on the phone loudly，a tall man is smoking，the other two men are talking loudly，a woman is eating on her seat and she dropped a lot of litter．I think everyone should obey the bus regulations，it is not allowed to smoke on the bus．It is better not to talk loudly，or others will feel uncomfortable．We should not drop litter on the bus．Buses are public places，and everyone should pay attention to their social behavior．
【分析】高分句型一
I think everyone should obey the bus regulations．我认为每个人都应该遵守公车管理规定．I think是主句，后面的是宾语从句． 高分句型二
it is not allowed to smoke on the bus．在公共汽车上是不允许抽烟的．it is not allowed to do sth．不允许做某事．
【解答】Impolite manners can be seen in public places quite often．Here is a situation from a No.56 bus．A man with a handbag on his knees （膝盖）is talking on the phone loudly，a tall man is smoking，the other two men are talking loudly，a woman is eating on her seat and she dropped a lot of litter．【要点一，对图中乘客在公交车上的举止描述】I think everyone should obey the bus regulations【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】，it is not allowed to smoke on the bus【高分句型二，注意固定句型的使用】．It is better not to talk loudly，or others will feel uncomfortable．We should not drop litter on the bus．Buses are public places，and everyone should pay attention to their social behavior．【要点二，建议】
【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．
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From： Bill Hi， Li Ping，
How is everything going？ Last month， I saw a movie called My People My Homeland. It's such a great movie and it showed me the great change China has made. I am really interested in your hometown. I wonder where your hometown is？ What did it use to be like？ And what's the biggest change in your city？ Besides， could you please tell me what your city is famous for？ Hope you can tell me more about it. Looking forward to hearing from you. Dear Bill，
I am glad to hear from you.
Yours， Li Ping
【分析】【高分句型一】
What's more， the biggest change is that more and more people are living better and happier lives.更重要的是，最大的变化是越来越多的人生活得更好，更幸福。 that引导表语从句。 【高分句型二】
Today's Shijiazhuang is a beauty and modern city， which is famous because of its rich of human geological resources.今天的石家庄是一座美丽而现代的城市，因其丰富的人文地质资源而闻名于世。
which引导非限定性定语从句。 【解答】Dear Bill，
I am glad to hear from you and I am happy to share with you about my hometown， Shijiazhuang. （点题）Shijiazhuang is the capital of Hebei province， 280 km to Beijing in the south and 270 km to Tianjin. Shijiazhuang is quite different from ten years ago. In the past， there was a little road in the city. The road was very narrow and the traffic was very heavy. There were only three parks in the city at ten years ago. The air pollution was very serious. （过去的样子）However， with the development of social economy and science and technology， Shijiazhuang has been developing in a good direction. The roads get wider， and there are more and more parks. Of course， the air also improved a lot. What's more， the biggest change is that more and more people are living better and happier lives.【高分句型一】（哪些变化以及最大的变化） Today's Shijiazhuang is a beauty and modern city， which is famous because of its rich of human geological resources.【高分句型二】（以什么出名） It attracts many foreigners to come here to go sightseeing and makes here develop very fast. Welcome to my hometown with your family.（表示欢迎）
Yours， Li Ping
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
12．题目①
假如你是李华， 你校要举办\"传统工艺作品展（Chinese Arts & Crafts Show） \"， 展示同学们制作的作品．请你用英语写一封邮件， 邀请你校交换生Peter来参观， 告诉他展览举办的时间和地点， 以及在作品展上他能看到什么、做些什么， 并说明邀请他的原因． 提示词语： paper cut， kite， make， traditional culture 提示问题：
When and where is the show going to be held？ What will Peter see and do at the show？ Why do you want to invite him？ Dear Peter， I'm
writing
to
invite
you
to
the
Chinese
Arts&Crafts
Show
in
our
school．__________________________________________． If there is anything more you want to know， please tell me． Yours， Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think it's a good chance to help you know more about Chinese traditional culture．
我认为这是一个帮助你了解中国传统文化的好机会．I think+宾语从句．it's a good chance to do sth做某事的好机会． 【高分句型二】
If there is anything more you want to know， please tell me． 如果你还有什么想知道的，请告诉我．if引导条件状语从句． 【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm writing to invite you to the Chinese Arts&Crafts Show in our school． It is going to be held in the school hall at 3：00 this Friday afternoon．（时间和地点） At the show， you will see some students' works， like paper cuts， kites and lanterns． You can also learn to make a kite there．（具体活动） I think it's a good chance to help you know more about Chinese traditional culture．【高分句型一】 I'm looking forward to seeing you there．（邀请原因） If there is anything more you want to know， please tell me．【高分句型二】（总结全文） Yours， Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
13．假如你是来自Xinhua Middle School的学生Li Hua，请阅读下面一则招聘广告，根据广告内容写一封应聘信．
Help with Sports in English
Are you busy after school？Can you speak English？Are you good at one or more sports？We need you to help with sports for English﹣speaking students．It is relaxing and easy!Please come to the Students' Sports Center．Write to Mr．Brown at 578192573@qq．com． 要求：1．应聘信需回答广告中所有问题，并可适当发挥 2．语句通畅，书写规范，注意时态、大小写字母和标点： 3．文中不得出现自己真实的姓名、班级和校名； 4．词数60左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数． Dear Mr Brown，
I am a student from Xinhua Middle School．I think I am the right person for the job． ．
I am looking forward to your reply． 【分析】高分句型一：
I think I can help the English﹣speaking students with basketball and Ping﹣Pong．我想我可以帮助说英语的学生打篮球和乒乓球．句子中think后面跟的是一个宾语从句． 高分句型二：
It's also a good chance for me to make more friends．这也是我结交更多朋友的好机会．句子中It's a good chance for sb to do sth表示对某人来说是做某事的好机会． 【解答】Dear Mr．Brown，
I am a student from Xinhua Middle School．I think I am the right person for the job．（引出话题） I am an outgoing and helpful girl．We don't have much schoolwork，so I am always free after school．（原因） At school my favorite subject is English and I can speak good English．I
am also good at sports I can play both basketball and Ping﹣Pong well（爱好）．I think I can help the English﹣speaking students with basketball and Ping﹣Pong． 【高分句型一】It's also a good chance for me to make more friends．【高分句型二】（理由） I'm looking forward to your reply．（期待）
Yours， Li Hua
【点评】在写作时要求能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
14．题目②
初中三年的学校生活即将成为美好的回忆．回首三年时光，你有哪些收获？即将毕业，你有什么感受？
假如你是李华，你校英文校刊邀请你写一篇短文谈谈毕业之际的感想，内容包括你三年学校生活的收获以及你即将毕业的感受． 提示词语： knowledge， friend， memory， happy 提示问题：●What have you got during the past three years？ ●How do you feel upon graduation？ ．
【分析】【高分句型一】
I used to be shy and had few friends．我过去很害羞，几乎没有朋友． used to do sth过去常常做某事． 【高分句型二】
With the help of my English teacher， I have made great progress in English． With the help of 在……的帮助下． make great progress取得很大的进步．
【解答】Three years of junior high school life will soon become a happy memory． In the past three years， I have changed a lot． I used to be shy and had few friends．【高分句型一】But now I am happy and outgoing．Gradually，I made some good friends． I used to dislike reading， but now I like reading very much． With the help of my English teacher， I have made great progress in English．【高分句型二】（我的收获）
Now， I am very sad to leave my teachers and classmates．I think I'll miss them．I hope they will be better in the future．（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
15．三年初中学习生活即将结束，同学们在毕业纪念册上互赠留言．假如你是 Li Hua，曾在英语学习方面遇到困难，是外籍交换生 Sam 同学主动关心、帮助你，使你走出困境．临近毕业，你想对他表示感谢．请根据下表中的内容和要求，在 Sam 的毕业纪念册上用英语写一段留言．
1． 在英语学习方面遇到的困难
2． Sam 对你的帮助和建议 3． 你的收获和感谢
多听多读
多看英语电影、多唱英文歌曲 …（自由发挥，至少一条）
内容
1． 不得出现真实的校名和人名
要求 2． 80 词左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数） Dear Sam，
How time flies! It's time for us to say goodbye．
． Thank you for all your help． And best wishes for you!
Yours， Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
It was difficult for me to memorize so many words and understand what people were saying． 对我来说记这么多单词，理解别人说的话都很难．本句使用了句型It is +adj．+ for sb+ to do sth． 另外，understand 后用了宾语从句what people were saying． 【高分句型二】
However， I'm so lucky that I met you， a kind﹣hearted， smart and patient boy．
不过，我很幸运遇到了你，一个善良、聪明、有耐心的男孩．so..that如此……以至于，引导结果状语从句． 【解答】Dear Sam，
How time flies! It's time for us to say goodbye．
You have offered me so much help in my English that I think words to express thanks are far from enough． I still remember three years ago， I had difficulties in learning English． It was difficult for me to memorize so many words and understand what people were saying．【高分句型一】My spoken English and written English were poor too．（在英语学习方面遇到的困难）
However， I'm so lucky that I met you， a kind﹣hearted， smart and patient boy．【高分句型二】Firstly， you taught me to listen more and read more． Besides， you suggested that I should watch English movies and sing classic English songs． In addition， you told me to form the habit of reading aloud in the morning and reading novels before going to bed． （ Sam 对我的帮助和建议）As a result， I finally made great progress and had a better understanding of English．Thank you for all your help． And best wishes for you!（收获和感谢）
【点评】这是一篇材料作文，所给表格里面的内容就是本文写作要点．这些要点构成写作的基本框架．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲，提纲包括所有提示要点．写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）．
16．为了鼓励人们积极向他人传递关爱，某青少年英文网站\"The Link of Love\"（爱的链接）专栏开展征文活动．请你给该专栏投稿． 内容包括：
（1）你想向谁表达你的关爱？为什么？ （2）你打算做些什么来表达你的关爱？ 作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名．
（2）语句连贯，词数80个左右．作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上．
We are growing up in love and care from people around． It is important to love and care for others．
_______________． 【分析】【高分句型一】 It will make her very happy．
这会让她非常高兴．make +n．/pron．+adj．使得某人怎么样． 【高分句型二】
Third， I will do the housework that day so that she can have a good rest．
第三，那天我会做家务，以便她能好好休息．so that以便，目的是；引导目的状语从句． 【解答】We are growing up in love and care from people around． It is important to love and care for others． I love my mum． She gave me life， and taught me a lot．（向妈妈表达关爱及理由）
Next Sunday will be Mother's Day．In order to show my love for my mum， I decide to do something for her． First， I will book a singing room for my mother． I know she likes singing and dancing． Second， I will buy a beautiful gift for her． It will make her very happy．【高分句型一】Third， I will do the housework that day so that she can have a good rest．【高分句型二】（表达关爱的做法）
I really hope she will have a good time on that day!（希望）
【点评】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误．最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误．
17．假如你是刘英，琳达（ Linda）是两年前就读于你校的交换生，昨天你收到了她的电子邮件． Dear Liu Ying
Long lime no see How is everything going？I miss you very much．I think you must be beautiful now．Write and tell me what you look like now．
Yours， Linda．
请根据上面的邮件，给她回一封邮件．内容包括： 1．比以前长高了，更健康了；
2．看电视、玩电脑游戏的时间少了，学习的时间多了； 3．性格变得更加外向了，交了很多朋友． 4．词数70个左右（开头和结尾不计入总词数）． Dear Linda，
Long time no see!I also miss you very much．
Come to visit me if you're free．
Yours， Liu Ying
【分析】【高分句型一】
I used to spend too much time watching TV or playing computer games．我过去花太多的时间看电视或玩电脑游戏．used to do sth．过去经常做某事；spend doing sth．花费时间做某事．
【高分句型二】
I am happy I have changed so much!我很高兴我改变了这么多！这是一个宾语从句，I am happy是主句，后面的是宾语从句． 【解答】Dear Linda，
Long time no see!I also miss you very much．I am very glad to receive your letter and I am willing to tell you some changes on me．Now I am much higher than before and I am much healthier．（比以前长高了，更健康了）I used to spend too much time watching TV or playing computer games【高分句型一】，but now I have changed a lot．I prefer to spend time on my study．（看电视、玩电脑的时间少了，学习的时间多了）At the same time，I have been more outgoing and easygoing．I make a lot of friends and I can get well on with all of them．I am happy I have changed so much!【高分句型二】（性格变得外向了，交了很多朋友） Come to visit me if you are free． Yours， Liu Ying
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
18．作为中学生，同学们在日常的学习和生活中难免遇到各种烦恼和压力．请结合自身经历，写一篇短文．
内容包括：1． 中学生在学习和生活中遇到的苦恼与压力； 2． 谈谈自己放松的方法（不少于3条）； 3． 希望大家能努力学习，享受中学生活．
作文要求：1． 不能照抄原文； 2． 语句连贯，词数70词左右． 【分析】高分句型一：
Not only my teachers but also my parents give me a lot of homework to do．不仅我的老师，而且我的父母给我很多作业做．考查短语not only…but also． 高分句型二：
I think we should make good plans for our study． 我认为我们应该为我们的学习做好计划．这是一个省略了that的宾语从句．
【解答】As a teenager， I find it hard to relax myself．（开篇点题） Not only my teachers but also my parents give me a lot of homework to do（高分句型一）． At weekends I have to go to the piano class． I am not allowed to play computer games．I have no time to do sports． （遇到的苦恼与压力）That's not good for our health or study． I think we should make good plans for our study（高分句型二）． We had better talk to our parents and tell them what we want to do． At the same time， we can also listen to some favorite music to relax ourselves．（自己放松的方法）In this way we may enjoy our life better（作者的期望）．
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
19．假设你叫李华，是学校社团的负责人．请根据以下内容和要求给学校的英文校报写一篇短文，向同学们介绍学校的社团活动． 注意：
1．词数60﹣80灰右（开头和结已给出，不计入总词数）； 2．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息．否则不予评分． 参考仰汇：solar power （太阳能）
Super Sports Club 观看球赛 打乒乓球、篮球 强身健体
Welcome to Our Clubs!
There are many clubs in our school． Let me tell you about them． There is something for everyone in our school clubs． Why not join us! 【分析】高分句型一
Let me tell you about them．此句是祈使句的肯定句．句子结构：V（动词原形）+其他．运用短语let sb do sth \"让某人做某事\"，短语tell sb about sth \"关于某事告诉某人\"，此句可翻译为\"关于它们让我来告诉你．\" 高分句型二
We can play table tennis and basketball．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语play+球类\"打…球\"，此句可翻译为\"我们能打乒乓球和篮球．\" 高分句型三
Smart Boats Club 建造小船 用太阳能驱动小船
了解科学
Cool Books Club 每天阅读一小时 写读书笔记
…（请补充你的一点想法）
Drive the boat with solar power．此句是祈使句．drive…with…\"用…驱动\"，此句可翻译为\"用太阳能驱动小船．\" 高分句型四
This can improve our reading ability and writing level．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语reading ability and writing level\"阅读能力和写作水平\"，此句可翻译为\"这能提高我们的阅读能力和写作水平．\" 【解答】Welcome to Our Clubs!
There are many clubs in our school． Let me tell you about them．（高分句型一）（要点一，介绍学校的俱乐部．）At the Super Sports Club．We can watch the ball game．We can play table tennis and basketball．（高分句型二）We can keep fit．（要点二，在超级体育俱乐部，能做的事情．）At the Smart Boats Club we can make boats． Drive the boat with solar power．（高分句型三）Through these we can get a better understanding of science． （要点三，在智能船俱乐部我们能做的事情．）At Cool Books Club．We can read for an hour every day and take notes． This can improve our reading ability and writing level．（高分句型四） Why not join us？（要点五，邀请加入）
【点评】本题是图表作文，在解答写作这类试题时，要根据所提供的内容，考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲，从而完成写作任务．
20．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信关心你将要参加的中考的情况，请根据以下表格的信息回信告知．
考试日期和科目
1． 考1． 6月16日至18日；
第一天考语文、物理（physics）；第二天是数学、政治（politics）；第三天是英语和化学（chemistry）．
考试准备情况 考试时的状态 对试题的感受 对考试结果的期待 提示词：
1．考进理想的学校： enter my ideal school
注意：1． 词数80左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）； 2． 不得透露自己学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分． Dear Tom，
Thank you for your concern． Well， I'm going to take the once﹣a﹣year Senior High School entrance examination． We are arranged to attend the exam on June 16th to 18th， on the first day， Chinese and physics will be tested， the second day maths and politics， the third day English and chemistry．Over the past days，we have been busy in preparing for this exam since we are in Grade 9．Besides listening to our teachers carefully in class， we often work deep 初三以来一直在准备……
会有点紧张，但会很快平静下来，因为……
不会很难，但要认真对待． 考进理想的学校……
into night． Therefore， I believe I can succeed．
At first， I will feel a bit nervous but soon I can calm down because Chinese and English are very easy and maths is my favorite subject， you know．So I suppose I can get a good mark and I will be able to enter my ideal school．
Best wishes!
Yours， Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：
Over the past days， we have been busy in preparing for this exam since we are in Grade 9．在过去的日子里，我们一直忙于准备考试，因为我们在9年级．这是一个现在完成进行时的句子，同时考查短语prepare for． 高分句型二：
So I suppose I can get a good mark and I will be able to enter my ideal school．所以我想我能取得好成绩，我就能进入我理想的学校．这是一个省略了that的宾语从句． 【解答】Dear Tom，
Thank you for your concern． Well， I'm going to take the once﹣a﹣year Senior High School entrance examination． We are arranged to attend the exam on June 16th to 18th， on the first day， Chinese and physics will be tested， the second day maths and politics， the third day English and chemistry．（考试日期和科目） Over the past days， we have been busy in preparing for this exam since we are in Grade 9．（高分句型一） Besides listening to our teachers carefully in class， we often work deep into night． Therefore， I believe I can succeed．（考试准备情况）
At first， I will feel a bit nervous but soon I can calm down because Chinese and English are very easy and maths is my favorite subject， you know．（考试的状态） So I suppose I can get a good mark and I will be able to enter my ideal school．（高分句型二）（考试的感受和期待） Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
21．请根据下面要求的信息点，写一篇作文．要求句子通顺，书写工整，格式规范，字数不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名及班级． 1．介绍自己及家庭成员； 2．介绍你及家人喜欢的运动； 3．介绍你房间的一样物品及其位置．
Hello，everyone!_______________________________________________________ 【分析】【高分句型一】
There are four people in my family我的家有四个人． there be有 【高分句型二】
My father and mother like playing table tennis我的爸爸妈妈喜欢打乒乓球． like doing sth喜欢做某事
【解答】Hello，everyone!My name is Eric Brown．Nice to meet you!I'm a student in a middle school．There are four people in my family．【高分句型一】They are my parents，little sister and me．I like sports very much．I always play tennis with my family．My father and mother like playing table tennis【高分句型二】．And my sister likes swimming．（介绍你及家人喜欢的运动；）I have a lovely room．The bed is near the bookcase．And there is a desk and a chair．The computer is on the desk．My room is tidy．（房间的一样物品及其位置）Do you want to be my friend？
【点评】写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合文章要表达的主题，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
22．寒假就要到了，请你根据图画和方框内的提示词描述你的寒假活动，用完整的句子表达．
The winter holiday is coming very soon．
go to Hai Nan Island，with my family，
sometimes，learn to swim in the sea
sometime，go fishing with my dad
If，not rain，fly kites，in the early morning
when，go home，do my homework．
【分析】1．我要和我的家人去参观海南岛． 2．有时我会在海里学游泳． 3．有时我会和爸爸一起去钓鱼． 4．如果不下雨，我们将在清晨去放风筝． 5．当我回家时，我会尽快做我的家庭作业．
【解答】1．I am going to visit Hai Nan Island with my family．根据：寒假就要到了，应该用一般将来时，be going to+动词原形表示将要做某事．with my family和我的家人． 2．Sometimes I will learn to swim in the sea．根据：寒假就要到了，应该用一般将来时，will+动词原形表示将要做某事．in the sea在海里．
3．Sometimes I will go fishing with my dad．根据：寒假就要到了，应该用一般将来时，will+动词原形表示将要做某事．with my dad和爸爸一起．
4．If it doesn't rain，we will go to fly kites in the early morning．这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时．
5．When I go back home，I will do my homework as soon as possible．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时．as soon as possible尽快地
【点评】考查连词成句．结合所给的题干，确定固定搭配，主谓宾定状补结构．再完成句子．
23．假设你是John，最近你向朋友Tom分享了自己寒假的学习和生活．请根据提示，写一篇90词左右的邮件．
1． 寒假每天7点半起床，10点半睡觉． 2． 参加数学和英语补习班（take……classes ） 3． 按计划完成各科作业 4． 帮忙做家务如搞卫生，购物． 5． 自己观点2点．
要求： 1． 文章必须包含全部要点内容，可作合理拓展；
2． 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
Hi， Tom． What's going on？ I would like to tell you something about my holiday life．
Yours， John
【分析】【高分句型一】
I would like to tell you something about my holiday life．我想告诉你一些关于我的假期生活． would like to do sth想做某事． 【高分句型二】
I have to study hard this term because I will have the final exam in 3 months．这学期我必须努力学习，因为三个月后我就要期末考试了． because引导原因状语从句．
【解答】Hi ，Tom． What's going on？I would like to tell you something about my holiday life．【高分句型一】（点题）
During the Winter Holiday， I did a lot of things． First， I got up at half past seven in the morning even though it was cold， and I went to bed at half past ten at night every day． Second， I took part in Maths and English lessons to learn more． Third， I finished all my homework according to my plan． Forth， I helped do some housework． For example， I often cleaned the floor or did some shopping for my family． Fifth， I did exercise often．Going to the park to have a walk or jogging was my favourite． Sixth， visiting my relatives during the Spring Festival was my lucky time because I could get lucky money! I have to study hard this term because I will have the final exam in 3 months． 【高分句型二】（介绍寒假学习和生活）
Yours， John 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
24．我们都热爱自己的母校，为自己是其中一员而自豪．但也许它在校园环境、课业负担、校服式样、课外活动、作息时间等诸多方面并不尽如人意．请你写一篇短文，谈谈母校存在的问题并提出合理化建议． 写作要求：
1．问题和建议至少两条 2．不必自拟标题
3．文中不得出现真实人名和地名 4．词数不少于80．
I love my school，I‘m proud of studying at the school．But I think there are some problems．As we known，nowadays more and more attention is paid to campus safety，including bicycle theft，traffic accidents and students' getting injured in school．It is directly related to the healthy growth of young students and the happiness of millions of families．How to protect us students？
There are several ways．First，we should raise our safety awareness﹣﹣﹣to take care of ourselves in school．Second，traffic regulations must be observed．Besides，we should be more careful in taking physical exercise．Last but not least，we should always stay calm when having trouble with other students．We should solve the problem by communicating rather than quarrel and fight． All teachers and students should make joint efforts to create a safe campus environment． ． 【分析】【高分句型一】
Last but not least，we should always stay calm when having trouble with other students最后也是最重要的，当我们和其他学生有不快的时候我们应该一直保持冷静．
when having trouble with other students＝when we have a trouble with other students省略句的使用． 【高分句型二】
We should solve the problem by communicating rather than quarrel and fight我们应该通过交流沟通解决问题而不是吵架． rather than 而不是
【解答】I love my school，I‘m proud of studying at the school．But I think there are some problems．As we known，nowadays more and more attention is paid to campus safety，including bicycle theft，traffic accidents and students' getting injured in school．It is directly related to the healthy growth of young students and the happiness of millions of families．（问题） How to protect us students？
There are several ways．First，we should raise our safety awareness﹣﹣﹣to take care of ourselves in school．Second，traffic regulations must be observed．Besides，we should be more careful in taking physical exercise．Last but not least，we should always stay calm when having trouble with other students．【高分句型一】We should solve the problem by communicating rather than quarrel and fight．【高分句型二】（建议）
All teachers and students should make joint efforts to create a safe campus environment． 【点评】写作时要注意一些几点：
（1）应抓住文章中心，围绕主题，根据提示列出要写的信息要点． （2）注意内容是否充实、积极和健康． （3）注意文章的结构层次，要凸显文章的主题．
（4）要注意语言规范，表达准确，选材造句都尽量使用学过、见过的语言材料．
25．根据下面的提示内容，以 \"Tom's life in 20 years\" 为题写一篇短文．
In 20 years
Job： police officer
Appearance（外貌）： tall，strong，short，straight hair
Place： Beijing
Sports： swimming，table tennis Family： two children 要求：不少于60词，字迹工整．
． 【分析】【高分句型一】
He will take up swimming and playing table tennis．
他将开始游泳和打乒乓球．take up doing sth．开始从事做某事 【高分句型二】
He will get married in his twenties．
他20多岁就要结婚．get married 结婚，in one's twenties在某人二十多岁时 【解答】Tom's life in 20 years
Tom is short and thin now．In 20 years he will be tall and strong．He will have short straight hair．（二十年后的外貌）Now he is a middle school student．In 20 years，he will be a police officer．He will work in Beijing．（二十年后的职业、工作地点）He will take up swimming and playing table tennis．【高分句型一】（二十年后的运动）He will get married in his twenties．【高分句型二】 He will have two children．His children will bring him great fun．（二十年后的家庭）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
26．请根据所给提示以\"My friend Simon\"为题，写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友Simon，包括以下要点．13岁，来自美国但是现在和家人居住在扬州．学习刻苦，最喜欢的科目是数学和英语，是校足球队成员，周末经常和同学去踢球，经常观看足球比赛，最喜欢的球员是姚明．
注意：（1）要点清楚，语言流畅，字数80词左右
（2）短文须包括所有要点内容，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥短发，带眼镜，又高又瘦．擅长电脑．
【分析】【高分句型一】
He studies so hard that he always gets good grades．
他学习很努力，总是取得好成绩．so…that…如此…以至于… 【高分句型二】
He wants to be a basketball player like Yao Ming when he grows up．
长大后想成为像姚明那样的篮球运动员．when引导时间状语从句．want to be想成为… 【解答】My friend Simon
I have a good friend．His name is Simon．He is 13 years old．He comes from America．He now lives in Yangzhou with his family．（基本信息）He studies so hard that he always gets good grades． 【高分句型一】His favorite subjects are math and English．（学习）He is a member of the school football team．On weekends， he often plays football and watches football
matches with his classmates（周末做什么）．His favorite player is Yao Ming．He wants to be a basketball player like Yao Ming when he grows up．【高分句型二】（最喜欢的球员） 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
27．假定你是李想，你的英国笔友John计划来你的家乡无锡游玩，给你发了封电子邮件，想详细了解你的家乡无锡．请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，并根据邮件内容用英语回信． To：lixiang@china．com From：john2004@uk．com Subject：your hometown Dear Li Xiang，
How are you？I hope you are well．I am planning my trip to China these days．I'm thinking about travelling to your hometown ﹣ Wuxi．Would you please tell me these things？
• What do you think of the environment（环境） in your hometown？ • How do you like the people in Wuxi？Why do you think so？ • What can I do when I travel in Wuxi？
• How can I get to different places during my stay in Wuxi？ Please write back and tell me everything．
Best wishes John 注意：
1．回信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3．词数70个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数． Dear John：
I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown ﹣ Wuxi．It is a good place to visit． _______．
I hope my answer is helpful to you．See you in Wuxi！
All the best，
Li Xiang
【分析】【高分句型一】
When you come to Wuxi，you can go to different parks and eat Chinese food．
当你来到无锡，你可以去不同的公园，并且吃到中国菜．when当……时候，引导时间状语从句． 【高分句型二】
If you go to different places in Wuxi，you can take a bus．
在无锡如果你去不同地方，你可以坐公共汽车．if如果，引导条件状语从句． 【解答】Dear John：
I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown ﹣ Wuxi．It is a good place to visit．The air is fresh in Wuxi．There are many trees and rivers．You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing．（环境） The people here are kind and helpful．In my community，people often help each other with problems． （人们友善爱帮助人，有问题互相帮助）When you come to Wuxi，you can go to different parks and eat Chinese food．【高分句型一】（去不同的公园，吃中国食物） If you go to different places in Wuxi，you can take a bus．【高分句型二】There are buses to different places every day． （ 交通） I hope my answer is helpful to you．See you in Wuxi！
All the best，
Li Xiang
【点评】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文．它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力．所以，考生不能遗漏要点，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式等．
28．Suppose Alison is your e﹣pal in Britain．She is very interested in your school life in NFLS．Please write an email to her with around 60 words． Your email should include：
1．your feeling about your school life in NFLS； 2．school clubs or extra﹣curricular activities in NFLS； 3．your favourite club or activity and the reason why you like it． Hi Alison，
How are things going？Hope you're well．
．
【分析】高分句型一：
I have learned that you are very interested in my school life in NFLS．我知道你对我在NFL的学校生活很感兴趣．句子使用了that引导的宾语从句．be interested in 表示对……感兴趣． 高分句型二：
I like English corner best because it helps me improve my spoken English a lot．句子使用了because引导的原因状语从句．help sb do sth表示帮着某人做某事． 【解答】Hi Alison，
How are things going？Hope you're well．I have learned that you are very interested in my school life in NFLS．【高分句型一】Let me tell you something about it．（引出话题） My school life in NFLS is very busy and colorful．（学校生活的感受） Everyone in my school is smart and outstanding．There are many kinds of extra﹣curricular activities in our school and we can be a member of any club we like．（学校俱乐部或课外活动） I like English corner best because it helps me improve my spoken English a lot．【高分句型二】（最喜欢的俱乐部） Do you like my school life？Hope you can come and experience it yourself．（希望） Sincerely，
Alice
【点评】首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等．
29．假设你是来自澳大利亚的学生 Henry 在阳光中学七（1）班进行交流学习，请 根据你的 happiness chart 向在澳大利亚的父母描述一下 你在中国的校园生活． Henry's happiness chart
Love
Subject
Homework
Like Dislike
Teachers &classmate
Sports
Classmates &library
注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；可适当发挥； 3．词数 80 左右，邮件开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数． Dear dad and mum，
I am very happy to tell you something about my school life in China．________________． All the best，
Henry
【分析】【高分句型一】
I like all the subjects，because they are very interesting．
我喜欢所有的科目，因为它们很有趣．because引导原因状语从句． 【高分句型二】
I think my school life is very fun．
我认为我的学校生活很有趣．I think+宾语从句． 【解答】Dear dad and mum，
I am very happy to tell you something about my school life in China．（点题）
My teachers are friendly to me，so I love them very much．My classmates often help me，so I like to play with them．I like all the subjects，because they are very interesting． 【高分句型一】I have to do homework after school，so I dislike it．I love sports，so I often play it with friends after class．（具体描述喜欢和不喜欢的） In all，I think my school life is very fun．【高分句型二】（总结全文） All the best． Henry
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
30．最近，你们学校公众号\"佳文共赏\"栏日将以\"My hero\"为题开展一次作文 评选，请以此为题写一篇短文，介绍你所敬佩的一位文体类名人，向该栏目投稿．
My hero Talents and achievements Difficulties he / she met and how he /
she dealt with them
Charity work
Your opinion（s） about him / her 要求：1． 80 词左右，语句流畅通顺； 2． 文章需涵盖以上要点，并作适当发挥； 3． 文中不得出现任何考生真实姓名； 【分析】【高分句型一】
I think he is my hero， not only because he is famous for playing badminton， but also because he is a kind man．
我认为他是我的英雄，不仅因为他以打羽毛球而闻名，也因为他是一个善良的人．I think+宾语从句； not only…but also…不仅…而且… 【高分句型二】
I want to work hard to make great progress in my study．
我要努力学习，取得更大进步．want to do sth想要做某事；动词不定式做目的状语，make progress取得进步． 【解答】My hero
My name is Zhao Ming Hao．I am crazy about sports．My hero is Lin Dan（点题，我的偶像是林丹）．Lin Dan has got great achievements．He has a gift for playing badminton and won won the badminton Olympic championship．（天赋和成就）He had some technical problems in training， but he never gives up achieving success through many years' of hard work．（遇到的问题以及解决办法）He loves charity and has donated far more than one million yuan to charity successively．（慈善工作）I think he is my hero， not only because he is famous for playing badminton， but also because he is a kind man． 【高分句型一】
As a student，I decide to learn from Lin Dan．I will try to achieve a balance between my school work and hobbies．I want to work hard to make great progress in my study．【高分句型二】（我的观点和努力方向）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
Useful expression：
have a gift for， win an award for， … never give up achieve success through， …
far more than， devote…to… be famous for / as， …
31．假设你是顾华，你的英国网友Sam给你发了一封邮件，想详细了解你在艺术领域方面的喜好．请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据邮件中的内容用英语回复．
To：Guhua@ 163．com From：Sam@yahoo．com Subject：Art Form
Dear Hua，
Glad to hear from you．You said you like art better than sports．I'd like to know more about it．
1．What's your favourite art form？What do you think of it？
2．Who has influenced you most in this area？What can you learn from him/her？ 3．Do you have any problems when you practice it？What have you done with them？ I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
All the best， Sam 注意事项：
1．英文邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2．词数90个左右，邮件的首尾已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数； 3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 4．邮件内容必须写在答题卷的指定位置．
To：Sam@yahoo．com From：Guhua@163．com Subject：Re：Art Form
Dear Sam，
I'm happy to tell you about my favourite art form．
Do you love art？Write to me soon．
Best wishes， Gu Hua 【分析】【高分句型一】
I think dancing can make me relax．我认为跳舞可以让我放松． I think+宾语从句． make sb+形容词，使某人… 【高分句型二】
At first，it was difficult for me to perform well when I practiced it．起初，当我练习的时候很难表现好．
It is+形容词 for sb to do sth．某人做某事是…的． when引导时间状语从句．
【解答】Dear Sam，
I'm happy to tell you about my favourite art form．（点题）
I like dancing best．I think dancing can make me relax．【高分句型一】We can show our love for life through dancing．Dancing cheers me up when I am blue and calms me down when I am too excited．（我喜欢的艺术形式及我的看法）My favorite dancer is Jin Xing．She is one of the greatest dancers in China．I learned a lot from him．She teaches me what to when I am in trouble．It is the most important to try to achieve your dream．（谁对我影响很大，以及我学到了什么）At first，it was difficult for me to perform well when I practiced it．【高分句型二】But I've made a lot of progress by exercising for two hours every day．（遇到的困难及解决办法）
Do you love art？Write to me soon．
Best wishes， Gu Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
32．近日，学校正在举行\"The person who has influenced me most\"的演讲比赛，你写了一篇演讲稿，准备参加演讲比赛，内容提示如下：
1．对我影响最大的人是鲁滨逊，他生于富有的家庭，却迷上了航海； 2．他乐意接受挑战，坚持实现他的梦想；
3．他旅程中陷入困境，在荒凉的岛屿上搭起帐篷求生；
4．他独自一人在岛上生活了十八年，足够耐心地等待回家的机会； 5．我应该… 注意事项：
1．演讲稿须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．第5个要点须用2﹣3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3．词数在90个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数； 4．参考词汇：航行，航海（sailing） 帐篷（tent） 【分析】高分句型一：
He is ready to take on challenges and insists on achieving his dream．
句中涉及的短语有：be ready to do sth 准备好做某事；take on 接受、呈现；insist on doing sth 坚持做某事．这句话意为：他准备好了接受挑战，并坚持实现他的梦想． 高分句型二：
When I'm in trouble in my my daily life，his spirit keeps me going．
句中\"When I'm in trouble in my my daily life\"为\"when\"引导的时间状语从句，句中涉及到的短语有：be in trouble 处于困境之中；keep sb doing sth 是某人持续做某事． 这句话意为：当我在生活中遇到困难时，他的精神使我一直坚持．
【解答】The person who has influenced me most is Robinson．（开篇点题）
He was born in a wealthy family，but he is crazy about sailing．He is ready to take on
challenges and insists on achieving his dream．【高分句型一】He gets into trouble during his journey．He puts up a tent on the lonely island for a living．He has lived alone on the island for 18 years．He is patient enough to wait for a chance to return home．I think I can learn from him．When I'm in trouble in my my daily life，his spirit keeps me going．【高分句型二】（介绍鲁滨逊的事迹）
That's all．Thank you．（致谢）
【点评】写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．
33．在一节写作课上，老师要求你们写一篇名为\"心目中的同学\"的短文，现在请你用英文来介绍一下你的同学Mike．
1）Mike学习刻苦，喜欢思考，能想出许多有创意的点子；
2）他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍，爱迪生的故事对他影响最大； 3）他对搞小发明很着迷，迄今为止，他已几次因其发明获奖； 4）现在学习忙碌，但他从未放弃爱好，他说这真是其乐无穷； 5）他的梦想…我认为… 注意事项：
1）短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2）第5要点的内容必须用2至3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3）词数90个左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数． 参考词汇：
有创意的 creative 爱迪生 Edison
My classmate Mike ishard﹣working．He likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas．In his childhood，he read many books about scientists．The story of Edison influenced him most．He is crazy about inventing things．So far，he has won several awards for inventions．Now he is busy with his study，but he has never given up his hobby．He says it's great fun for him．His dream is to be an inventor as great as Edison．I think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day． 【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是介绍一下你的同学Mike．时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1）Mike学习刻苦，喜欢思考，能想出许多有创意的点子；
2）他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍，爱迪生的故事对他影响最大； 3）他对搞小发明很着迷，迄今为止，他已几次因其发明获奖； 4）现在学习忙碌，但他从未放弃爱好，他说这真是其乐无穷； 5）他的梦想…我认为… 常用到的重点短语： come up with 想出…
be crazy about 对…着迷 give up 放弃
be known for 因…而著名 【高分句型】
1．His dream is ①to be an inventor②as great as Edison． ①动词不定式做表语，和be动词is构成系表结构． ②as…as与…一样．
2．I think①he will ②be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day ①后接省略了that的宾语从句． ②be known for 因…而著名
【解答】My classmate Michael is hard﹣working．He likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas．（Mike学习刻苦，喜欢思考，能想出许多有创意的点子）In his childhood，he read many books about scientists．The story of Edison influenced him most．（他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍，爱迪生的故事对他影响最大）He is crazy about inventing things．So far，he has won several awards for inventions．（他对搞小发明很着迷，迄今为止，他已几次因其发明获奖）Now he is busy with his study，but he has never given up his hobby．He says it's great fun for him．（现在学习忙碌，但他从未放弃爱好，他说这真是其乐无穷）His dream is to be an inventor as great as Edison．【高分句型】（他的梦想是成为像爱迪生一样的发明家）I think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day．【高分句型】（我认为他会实现梦想）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯
34．著名哲学家尼采（ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche）曾说过，\"Without music life would be a mistake．\"可见，音乐在人们的生活中扮演着重要的角色．请根据以下信息提示，结合自己的观点，以\"Without Music Life Would Be a Mistake\"为题，用英语写一篇短文，表达你对音乐的理解． 内容提示：
1．音乐是我的朋友；我可以从收音机中听到它，也可以在电视上看音乐录像； 2．音乐在我的生活中扮演着重要的角色，…；
3．前两天偶然听到谭盾的《水乐》（Water）；作品中，通过控制水流的速度，他用水制造出了五十多种声音；感觉非常神奇；
4．从此我对音乐更着迷，并确信我未来的生活也永远离不开音乐． 注意事项：
1．短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2．第二要点用2～3句展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3．词数在90个左右，短文标题和开头已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数．
Without Music Life Would Be a Mistake
Music is my friend． I can either hear it on the radio or watch music videos on TV．Music plays an important role in my life．When feeling sad，music cheers me up．While I'm lonely，it can be with me through the hard times．The other day I happened to hear Water by Tan Dun．In the work，he makes over 50 sounds from water by controlling the speed of water flow．That's really amazing．I have been crazier about it since then．I'm sure I will live with music in the future． ．
【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以\"Without Music Life Would Be a Mistake\"为题，表达你对音乐的理解．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一、三人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．音乐是我的朋友；我可以从收音机中听到它，也可以在电视上看音乐录像； 2．音乐在我的生活中扮演着重要的角色，…；
3．前两天偶然听到谭盾的《水乐》（Water）；作品中，通过控制水流的速度，他用水制造出了五十多种声音；感觉非常神奇；
4．从此我对音乐更着迷，并确信我未来的生活也永远离不开音乐． 常用到的重点短语： either …or …要么…要么… cheer up 使…振奋起来 be crazy about 对…着迷 happen to 碰巧… 【高分句型】
1．①When feeling sad，music ②cheers me up． ①省略句，完整表达是when I feel sad． ②cheer up 使…振奋起来，代词需放其中间． 2．I'm sure①I will live ②with music in the future． ①省略了引导词that的宾语从句． ②with短语表伴随．
【解答】Without Music Life Would Be a Mistake
Music is my friend．I can either hear it on the radio or watch music videos on TV．（音乐是好朋友，听音乐的途径）Music plays an important role in my life．When feeling sad，music cheers me up．【高分句型】While I'm lonely，it can be with me through the hard times．（音乐在我生活中的角色）The other day I happened to hear Water by Tan Dun．In the work，he makes over 50 sounds from water by controlling the speed of water flow．That's really amazing．（听《水乐》的感想）I have been crazier about it since then．I'm sure I will live with music in the future．【高分句型】（对音乐更着迷，离不开）
【点评】本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表
达习惯．
35．今年年初，无锡被评为2013年度内地最宜居城市．假设你班对此进行了一次班级讨论，请你在答题卡指定的位置上用英语写一篇80词左右的发言稿，阐述你的观点和感想．内容提示如下：
1．政府修建了很多新路，大桥，甚至还有地铁；
2．新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩； 3．私家车越来越多，停车（park cars）已成了大问题； 4．城市变化有利有弊； 5．你的希望． 注意：
1．短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．第5要点的内容须用2～3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3．发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years． The government has built lots of new roads，bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of openparks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．More and more people have their own cars and it's become difficult to park cars．The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future． ．
【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈你对无锡被评为2013年度内地最宜居城市的观点和感想．时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时．人称主要为第三人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1．政府修建了很多新路，大桥，甚至还有地铁；
2．新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩； 3．私家车越来越多，停车（park cars）已成了大问题； 4．城市变化有利有弊； 5．你的希望． 常用到的重点短语： a number of 大量的 have fun 玩的开心 both…and…两者都 deal with 处理
比较级+and+比较级 越来越… 【高分句型】
1．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays． to have a picnic and have fun 动词不定式做目的状语．
2．①More and more people have their own cars and②it's become difficult to park cars．
①比较级+and+比较级 越来越…
②it是形式主语，后面的动词不定式是真正主语．
【解答】There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots of new roads，bridges and even undergrounds．（政府修建了很多新路，大桥，甚至还有地铁）There have been a number of open parks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．【高分句型】（新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩）More and more people have their own cars and it's become difficult to park cars．【高分句型】（私家车越来越多，停车已成了大问题）The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．（城市变化有利有弊；）I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future．（我的希望）
【点评】本文是一篇给材料作文，短文的开头已经给出．写作时先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，并且要有适当的发挥，在谈到自己的观点时，要结合活动内容，写出自己的观点．
36．假设你是阳光中学的一名七年级学生，上周五学校组织你们体验农场生活。据此 ，学校英文报将在下期开设\"Would you like to work on the farm？\"的专栏讨论活动。你打算用英语写一篇短文参加讨论。请先描述活动内容，并选择其中一个观点表达你的想法和理由。内容提示见下表：
Activities
feed animals （chickens，ducks …） pick fruits （tomatoes，cucumbers …）
Your opinion （观点） Reason（s） 注意事项：
（1）短文内容可根据写作要求自拟，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； （2）表格中带部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
（3）词数在 70 个左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； （4）短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； （5）内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
【分析】【高分句型一】
It was full of fun.充满了乐趣。be full of充满 【高分句型二】
I'd like to work on the farm because the air is fresh and we can hear the birds sing.我想在农场工作，因为空气新鲜，我们能听到鸟儿唱歌。because引导的原因状语从句
【解答】Last Friday，we had a school trip on the farm.We did many interesting things there.We fed chickens and ducks.We picked tomatoes，cucumbers.This is my first time to see so many pigs
exciting
learn a lot about farming
dirty not useful
Yes
No
and chickens.It was full of fun. 【高分句型一】Summer is a great season for fruits.I like tomatoes and watermelons most.I'd like to work on the farm because the air is fresh and we can hear the birds sing. 【高分句型二】We can also learn a lot about farming.（喜欢的理由） 【点评】这是一篇图表作文，题目要求围绕表格内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
37．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony春节期间要来一个中国家庭做客．请你根据他来信所提出的问题，给他写一封邮件，告诉他北京的天气状况，中国春节的一些习俗，并就他在中国家庭的居住生活提出至少两条建议．
提示词语：cold，snow，the most important，try not to，don't，it's a good idea，must．
To：Tony From：Li Hua
Subject：Visiting a Chinese family Hi!Tony，
I'm very glad to know that you will visit Beijing． Now it is cold．Sometimes it snows，you can bring some warm clothes．
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China．There are some special traditions for you to follow．Try not to break anything．And don't clean your room on the first day． When you visit a Chinese family，it is a good idea to bring a small gift．Usually Chinese people will give you a present in return．You must accept it with both hands．Remember to open it later． I hope this helps and enjoy your stay in Beijing． Yours， Li Hua．
【分析】高分句型一
There are some special traditions for you to follow．下面是你要遵循的一些特殊的传统． 这是
there be 句型，表示某地有某物． 高分句型二
When you visit a Chinese family，it is a good idea to bring a small gift．Usually Chinese people will give you a present in return．当你拜访一个中国家庭时，带一件小礼物是个好主意，通常中国人会送你一份礼物．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候． 【解答】To：Tony From：Li Hua
Subject：Visiting a Chinese family Hi!Tony，
I'm very glad to know that you will visit Beijing．Now it is cold．Sometimes it snows，you can bring some warm clothes．【要点一，介绍北京的天气】
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China．There are some special traditions for you to follow．【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】Try not to break anything．And don't clean your room on the first day．【要点二，介绍春节的传统】
When you visit a Chinese family，it is a good idea to bring a small gift．Usually Chinese people will give you a present in return【高分句型二，注意时间状语从句的使用】．You must accept it with both hands．Remember to open it later．【要点三，建议】 I hope this helps and enjoy your stay in Beijing． Yours， Li Hua
【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．
38．假设你是李明，你的笔友Peter来信谈到他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡无锡的情况，请你用英语写一封回信．内容提示如下： 1．无锡位于中国东部，因太湖（Tai Lake） 而出名； 2．由5个区组成，如梁溪区（Liangxi District）、滨湖区；
3．过去许多工厂经常向湖里倾倒废弃物，最近政府已经采取措施减少污染； 4．每天我们都能看到一大群游客；每年来无锡的最好的时间是春天； 5．我希望…
注意：1．短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2．第5要点内容共须用2～3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3．词数80个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数． Dear Peter，
It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city．Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi． I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Ming
【分析】这篇作文叫小作者介绍Peter 所居住的城市．句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致．文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性． 高分句型：
①Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi．现在我想告诉你一些关于我家乡无锡的事情．句子中would like to do sth表示想做某事．
②I'm looking forward to hearing from you．我期待着收到你的来信．句子中look forward to doing sth表示期待做某事，后面跟动词的ing形式． 【解答】Dear Peter，
It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city．Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi．（高分句型）（引出话题） Wuxi lies in the eastern part of China．It is famous for Tai Lake．It is made up of five districts such as Liangxi District and Binhu District．（无锡的地理位置及组成）In the past，many factories put its waste into the lake．Recently the government has taken action to reduce pollution．（无锡过去及现在）Every day we can see a large group of visitors here．The best time to visit Wuxi is （in） spring．（大量游客在春天来游玩）I hope you can come and visit soon．I'll show you around it．I'm sure you'll have great fun．（我的希望）
I'm looking forward to hearing from you．（高分句型）（我的期待）
Yours，
Li Ming
【点评】这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全．文中有一些好的表达方式如It is made up of five districts such as Liangxi District and Binhu District．Many factories used to put its waste into the lake．等等．
39．请根据下列要点，完成一篇关于介绍上周末你和家人一起去户外野营的情况的短文。 要点：
（1）上周末你和父母一起去野营了，非常激动。 （2）因为你们喜欢待在户外，亲近美丽的山河。
（3）你和爸爸在湖边搭了一个帐篷，然后一起划船，放风筝。 （4）妈妈生火做饭，晚饭后一起在湖边散步。 （5）你永远不会忘记这次野营。
（6）我希望……（用1﹣2句话，谈谈感受）
注意： （1）文章须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； （2）第5要点须用1﹣2句话适当发挥； （3）词数在80左右。 _________
【分析】【高分句型一】
We were very excited because we like staying outside，near beautiful lakes and hills.
我们非常兴奋，因为我们喜欢呆在外面，靠近美丽的湖泊和小山。because因为，引导原因状语从句。 【高分句型二】 What a happy day we had!
我们度过了多么快乐的一天啊！本句使用了感叹句，型结构为：What +a/an+形容词+单数名词+主语+谓语动词！
【解答】Last weekend I went camping with my parents.We were very excited because we like staying outside，near beautiful lakes and hills. 【高分句型一】
（上周末你和父母一起去野营了，非常激动。因为喜欢待在户外，亲近美丽的山河）My father and I put up a tent by the lake，then we rowed a boat and flew a kite.（我和爸爸在湖边搭了一个帐篷，然后一起划船，放风筝。） My mother made a fire and cooked meals.After dinner we went walking by the lake.（妈妈生火做饭，晚饭后一起在湖边散步。）What a happy day we had! 【高分句型二】I will never forget this camping. （永远不会忘记这次野营） I hope we can go camping next time.（希望）
【点评】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
40．\"无锡市安全教育平台\"让广大中小学生学到了许多安全知识。假如你是Jack，你的英国朋友Simon 想了解平台的相关内容，请你根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文，从提供的六个类别里选两个，跟Simon谈谈相应的保护自身安全的措施，并分享你的体会。
Categories（类别） fire safety natural disasters
food safety internet safety accidental injuries
Contents（内容） traffic safety Solution（措施） 会）
提示词汇：Accidental injuries 意外伤害 treasure珍爱 Dear Simon，
﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣（请按你自选的两类内容分别写两点）
Understanding（体treasure life；﹣﹣﹣（请写1﹣2点）
Safety is very important.Our government especially pays attention to teenage safety.A website called\"wuxi.safetree.com\" helps us gain a lot of knowledge of safety.On the website，I have learned a lot. 【分析】高分句型一：
We often like eating fast food or snacks in leisure time，because they taste very delicious.我们经常喜欢在闲暇时间吃快餐或小吃，因为它们味道很可口。like doing sth表示喜欢做某事。
高分句型二：
It's necessary for us to obey the traffic rules，especially when we're about to cross the roads.我们必须遵守交通规则，特别是当我们要过马路的时候。It's necessary for us to do sth表示对某人来说做某事是必须的。 【解答】Dear Simon，
Safety is very important.Our government especially pays attention to teenage safety.A website called wuxi.safetree.com helps us gain a lot of knowledge of safety.On the website，I have learned a lot.（引出话题）
Food safety is a very common question to us students.We often like eating fast food or snacks in leisure time，because they taste very delicious.【高分句型一】It's bad for our health and high in calories and fat.If we eat them every day，we may have weight problem.I once ate two hamburgers and some chips every day.After several months，I became over weight and had a low spirit.Then I decided to give up fast food and take more exercise.Now I feel very energetic.Next，the traffic safety is also a big trouble.It's necessary for us to obey the traffic rules，especially when we're about to cross the roads. 【高分句型二】We should pay more attention to the traffic lights.（安全的措施）
In conclusion，we must realize the dangers around us and treasure our lives.We should always consider safety as the top priority.（体会） Yours， Jack
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
41．你们学校将要举行英语演讲比赛，主题是围绕\"十年以后的你\"．假如你是李华，请以\"What will I be like in ten years？\"为题目，根据下面的提示，准备一篇发言稿． 提示：
1． What are you going to do in ten years？ 2． Why are you going to do the job？
3． How are you going to make your dream come true？ 4． What will you do if your dream comes true？ 要求：
1． 不少于80词，开头已经给出，不计入总词数． 2． 条理清晰，语意连贯，可适当发挥．
What will I be like in ten years？
Hello， everyone! I'm Li Hua． It's so lucky for me to make a speech here． In the years，______________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
I'm going to try my best to learn Chinese and writing well．
我要尽我最大的努力学好中文和写作．try one's best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事．
【高分句型二】
It is necessary for a reporter to be good at writing．
记者要善于写作是很必要的．记者要善于写作是必要的．It is +形容词 for sb to do sth某人做某事是…的．
【解答】What will I be like in ten years？
Hello， everyone! I'm Li Hua． It's so lucky for me to make a speech here．（点题） In the years，I think I am going to be a reporter．I will live in an apartment with my sister．Because I don't like living alone．And I can play with her in my apartment．So in ten years，I will be a good reporter．（十年后的职业及原因）I'm going to try my best to learn Chinese and writing well． 【高分句型一】It is necessary for a reporter to be good at writing．【高分句型二】（如何实现梦想）When my dream come true，I will meet a lot of interesting and famous people． I will go to another places on business．And I will go to London on my vacation．So，my life in ten years will be better and better!（实现梦想后的生活）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
42．假如今年暑假，你和你父母去了杭州旅游． 请根据以下要点，以\"Our trip to Hangzhou \"为题写一篇80字左右的短文，结束那次旅游．
1．今年暑假，我和父母自驾去杭州旅游，行程约四个小时． 2．杭州市我国最美丽的城市之一，有许多名胜． 3．我们参观的西湖（the West Lake），玩得很开心． 4．我们品尝了美食，了解了不同的文化． 5．我们很累，但很开心．我希望…
要求：第五点用1﹣2句话进行切合主题的发挥． Our trip to Hangzhou 【分析】高分句型一
It took us four hours to get there．此句是一般过去时的陈述句．运用句型：It takes sb some time to do sth．\"做某事花某人多少时间\"，此句可翻译为\"到达那里花我们4个小时的时间．\" 高分句型二
I hope I can go there again．此句是一般现在时的宾语从句．句子I can go there again．是动词hope 的宾语．运用短语go there \"去那里\"，此句可翻译为\"我希望再去那里．\" 【解答】Our trip to Hangzhou
My parents and I drove car to Hangzhou this summer holiday． It took us four hours to get there．（高分句型一）（要点一，这个暑假和父母自驾一起去了杭州旅游．） We enjoyed ourselves there．
As we all know， Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in China． There are many places of interest in it．（要点二，杭州是我国最美丽的城市之一，有许多名胜．） We visited the West Lake． When we saw it， we couldn't believe our eyes． How big and beautiful! We had a
good time there．（要点二，我们参观了西湖，我们玩的很开心．） We also tasted many kinds of food and learned a
lot about different cultures．（要点三，我们品尝了美食，了解了不同的文化．）We were very tired， but we still felt very happy． I hope I can go there again．（高分句型二） If you can go and see for yourself， I believe you'll love it very much．（要点四，自己的感受和希望．）
【点评】本题是提纲作文，能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
43．\"五一小长假\"快到了．假如你是Millie，想要邀请你扬州的朋友Alice来你家做客．根据下面提供的信息，用英语写一封邀请信．
地理位置 社区
市中心公寓里，住在9楼，离曲江楼（Qujiang Building）只有2公里远
绿树环绕，干净整洁……
邻居友好，乐于助人，志愿者……（至少举一例）
路线
乘火车从姜堰火车站（Jiangyan Railway Station）出来；乘819路公共汽车在人民桥（Renming Bridge）下，往前；第1个路口右转，你就会看到
一个超市；我家就在超市的旁边．
要 求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）词数：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； Dear Alice，
I am very happy to invite you to my new home．
Welcome to my home．I think you'll have a good time here． Yours， Millie
【分析】【高分句型一】
When you get out of Jiangyan Railway Station，take No．819 Bus and get off at Renming Bridge．当你走出姜堰火车站，乘819路公共汽车在人民桥下车． when引导时间状语从句． 【高分句型二】
I think you'll have a good time here．我认为你在这里会玩得很开心． I think +宾语从句；have a good time 玩的开心． 【解答】Dear Alice，
I am very happy to invite you to my new home．My home is on the ninth floor in a flat in the city centre．It's only 2 kilometres away from Qujiang Building．（地理位置）
In our community，there are green trees everywhere．It's clean and tidy．You can smell the beautiful flowers and hear birds sing in the morning．The neighbours are kind and helpful．The volunteers often help the elderly do some cleaning．We are like a big family．（社区）
You can come here by train．When you get out of Jiangyan Railway Station，take No．819 Bus and get off at Renming Bridge．【高分句型一】Walk straight on，take the first turning on the right and then you will see a supermarket．My home is next to it．You can't miss it!（路线） Welcome to my home．I think you'll have a good time here．（表示欢迎）【高分句型二】 Yours， Millie
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
44．暑假即将到来，很多家长想让孩子参加暑假学习班，但学生对此意见不一．初二（1）班的学生就\"学生是否应该上暑假学习班\"展开了热烈的讨论，讨论结果如下．
注意：
1．词数90字左右．开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．包含所有要点，可适当发挥；要求语句通顺、意思连贯、书写整洁； 3．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称． 【分析】高分句型： 句型一：
Some believe that children should learn as much as possible since they have strong ability to grasp new knowledge．一些人认为孩子们应该趁他们这个年纪学习能力很强的时候去多学习一些新知识．
have ability to do sth有能力做某事 as much as possible 尽可能多 句型二：
Kids learn more skills will be more flexible and smart than those who never attend training classes in doing certain kinds of things．在做某种特定的事情的时候，那些拥有多重技能的孩子会比那些没有参加过培训课的小孩子更加灵活、聪明． who引导的定语从句 training classes 培训课
【解答】答案：It is quite common phenomenon that many parents will bring their children to all kinds of classes as long as their children have weekends or holidays．This kind of situation has been hot discussed among public．Some people hold that children deserve to have play time as much as possible．They have a lot of homework to do，and they don't have much time
left．（反对者的观点）
Some believe that children should learn as much as possible since they have strong ability to grasp new knowledge．【高分句型一】Summer classes help them review and learn new content and prepare for the new term．（赞成者的观点）
Standing on my point of view，I'm convinced that children should be sent to training class to learn as much as possible so that they can be more brilliant．Firstly，training class can broaden children's knowledge．For almost all children，they have very limited knowledge．But if they are sent to training class，they can learn various knowledge of life．Thirdly，children can be more outstanding in the future compared with those who don't attend training class．Kids learn more skills will be more flexible and smart than those who never attend training classes in doing certain kinds of things．【高分句型二】（我的观点）
All in all，sending kids to training classes will do a lot of good to children's future．
【点评】写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力，涉及学生的词汇量，正确运用单词的能力，对所学语法的掌握程度，能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等．
45．健康的生活习惯对于成长中的学生非常重要．最近你们学校就\"健康的生活习惯\"话题向全体学生征文．请你根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校投稿． 健康的生活习惯
早睡早起 适当锻炼 合理饮食 注意卫生 …（补充1点）
你的想法 注意：
1．词数90左右．短文的开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
2．短文须包含所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺． 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
Keeping healthy
It is so important to make\"keeping healthy\"a part of our day﹣to﹣day living habits． ． 【分析】【高分句型一】
Staying up too late is bad for our health．熬夜对我们的健康有害． staying up too late 熬夜太晚．动名词作主语． be bad for对……有坏处． 【高分句型二】
As Grade Nine students， we have to spend more time on study．作为九年级的学生，我们必须花更多的时间在学习上．
…（自拟1点）
spend on在……上花费…… 【解答】Keeping healthy
It is so important to make \"keeping healthy\" a part of our day﹣to﹣day living habits．（点题） All of us want to be healthy． We should get enough sleep during the night and get up early． Staying up too late is bad for our health．【高分句型一】 We should do more exercise to build up our bodies．We must also have a balanced diet． We need to eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat．
Keeping good habits can help us prevent the disease． Remember to wash our hands properly before eating， after going to the bathroom and getting home． If necessary， we should wear masks．Most of us have teenage problems． We can reduce stress by listening to music， reading books or talking to our parents， friends and teachers for help．（健康的生活习惯） As Grade Nine students， we have to spend more time on study．【高分句型二】 However， keeping good habits and staying happy are ways to be healthy．（我的想法）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
46．苏州国际旅游节即将在五月举办．假如你是李明，想要邀请南京的朋友王雷来你家做客．根据下面提供的信息，用英语写一封邀请信．
地理位置 社区
市中心公寓，住9楼，离观前街只有2公里
绿树环绕，干净整洁
邻居友好，乐于助人（至少举一例）
路线
乘火车从苏州火车站出来：左转进入人民路，往前； 第三个路口右转，你就会看到一个超市；我家就在超市的对面．
注意：（1）词数90左右．邀请信的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数． （2）邀请信须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺． （3）邀请信中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Dear Wanglei，
I'm very happy to invite you to my new home．
Welcome to my home．I'm looking forward to meeting you soon．
Yours，Liming
【分析】【高分句型一】
We are lucky to live in a neighborhood like this．我们很幸运，生活在这样的社区． be lucky to do sth幸运的做某事． 【高分句型二】
I'm looking forward to meeting you soon．我期待着尽快见到你． look forward to doing sth期待做某事． 【解答】Dear Wanglei，
I am very happy to invite you to my new home．I live in a flat on the ninth floor in the city
center．It is only five kilometers away from the Guanqian Street．（地理位置）
There are many green trees around my neighborhood．It's clean and tidy here．The air is fresh，too．The neighbours are kind and helpful．The college volunteers often share their skills and help us with different problems．We are lucky to live in a neighborhood like this．（社区）【高分句型一】
Let me tell you the way to my home．You can take the train．Get out from Suzhou Railway Station．Turn left into Renmin Road and go straight on．Turn right at the third turning，and you'll see a supermarket．My home is just opposite it． （路线）
Welcome to my home．I'm looking forward to meeting you soon．（期待）【高分句型二】 Yours， Liming
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
47．假如你是学校的小记者，日前对学校\"最美志愿者\"Amy进行了采访．请根据以下采访记录，用英语写一篇稿件，向读者介绍她的情况．
兴趣爱好 感人事迹
1．读书．每天约花一小时阅读． 2．旅游．去过中国西部地区． 1．贫困学生患重病，为其集资做手术． 2．发现女童辍学，联系政府帮助其复学．
未来计划
1．今年暑假：宣传环境保护，因为…（原因自拟）．
2．以后有机会时：…（内容自拟）
注意：1．词数90词左右．短文开头已写好，不计入总词数．
2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺． 3．短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
Amy was presented the Most Beautiful Young Volunteer in our school． She likes reading．When she was young，she read the four great classical Chinese novels．And she likes travelling，too．She has visited many places in the west of our country．This helped her learn more about the country．
Amy organized several activities to raise money fora boy from a poor family．The boy got a serious disease．With Amy's support，the boy was cured after the operation．Last year，she found a girl had to leave school，she wrote to the local government and helped the girl return to school． This summer，she decides to tell people to protect the environment because she finds the environment is changing for the worse．If possible，she may take part in some charities to work for more people．
She says she doesn't have as much spare time as before，but her life is more meaningful． ． 【分析】【高分句型一】
When she was young，she read the four great classical Chinese novels．当她小的时候，她读中
国四大古典小说． when引导时间状语从句． 【高分句型二】
This summer，she decides to tell people to protect the environment because she finds the environment is changing for the worse．今年夏天，她决定告诉人们保护环境，因为她发现环境开始恶化．
decide to do sth开始做某事；because引导原因状语从句．
【解答】Amy was presented the Most Beautiful Young Volunteer in our school．She likes reading．She spends an hour reading books every day．When she was young，she read the four great classical Chinese novels． 【高分句型一】And she likes travelling，too．She has visited many places in the west of our country．This helped her learn more about the country．（兴趣爱好）
Amy organized several activities to raise money for a boy from a poor family．The boy got a serious disease．With Amy's support，the boy was cured after the operation．Last year，she found a girl had to leave school，she wrote to the local government and helped the girl return to school．（感人事迹）
This summer，she decides to tell people to protect the environment because she finds the environment is changing for the worse．【高分句型二】If possible，she may take part in some charities to work for more people．（未来计划）
She says she doesn't have as much spare time as before，but her life is more meaningful．（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
48．假如你叫麦克，你的表哥李华\"五一劳动节\"期间来苏州游玩，你带他四处逛逛，你正写信告诉你的好友（Millie）这两天的活动内容．
时间 5月2日上午 5月2日下午 5月2日晚上 5月3日
活动地点 苏州博物馆 穹隆山 山塘街 书店
活动内容 了解苏州历史 看见青山绿树 闲逛古街老店 购买书籍
感受 自拟（至少一点）
要求：1．意思连贯，书写规范，要点齐全，注意格式． 2．词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数． 3．不要出现真实的人名和校名．
注：穹隆山the Qionglong Hill；山塘街Shantang Street Dear Millie．
Thank you for your letter．How is everything going？I am writing to tell you something about my May Day holiday
On the morning of May 2nd，we will go to the Suzhou museum to learn about the history of Suzhou，On the afternoon of May 2nd，we will go to the Qionglong Hill and see green hills and green trees．There are some old streets and shops on Shantang Street，we will go there in the evening．On May 3rd，we will go to the bookstore to buy books because I love reading．I think we will have a good trip．
Love，
Mike．
【分析】高分句型一
There are some old streets and shops on Shantang Street山塘街有一些古老的街道和商店．这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物． 高分句型二
I think we will have a good holiday我想我们会度过一个愉快的假期．这是一个宾语从句，I think是主句，后面的是宾语从句． 【解答】Dear Millie．
Thank you for your letter．How is everything going？I am writing to tell you something about my May Day holiday．
On the morning of May 2nd，we will go to the Suzhou museum to learn about the history of Suzhou，On the afternoon of May 2nd，we will go to the Qionglong Hill and see green hills and green trees．There are some old streets and shops on Shantang Street【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】，we will go there in the evening．On May 3rd，we will go to the bookstore to buy books because I love reading【要点一，详细介绍日程活动】．I think we will have a good holiday．【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．【要点二，自己的感受】 Love， Mike．
【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．
49．在初中三年里，你所在的班集体发生了很多事情，感人的、快乐的、令人激动的……这些事情让你越来越喜爱你的班集体．
某英文网站正在开展以\"我爱我的班集体\"为主题的征文活动．假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，描述一件事情，主要内容包括：这件事情发生的时间、经过，以及它让你更加热爱班集体的原因．
提示词语： sports meet， train， make preparations， cheer， proud 提示问题： • What happened？ When did it happen？ • Why did it make you love your class more？ I love my class
【分析】【高分句型一】
其他学生忙着设计海报和做其他准备工作．
Other students were busy designing posters and making other preparations． be busy doing sth忙着做某事 【高分句型二】
We worked together to achieve the success， which made me love my class more．我们一起努力取得了成功，这让我更加热爱我的班级． which引导非限定性定语从句 【解答】I love my class
Our school held the sports meet last month． Some of my classmates signed up for it． （点题） They trained hard after school every day． Other students were busy designing posters and making other preparations．【高分句型一】 At the meet， when my classmates were competing against students from other classes， we cheered loudly． Finally， our class won first place in Grade 9．（经过） Everyone felt excited and proud． We worked together to achieve the success， which made me love my class more．（感受）【高分句型二】
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
50．假设你是学校Health Club的成员，最近你对你校学生进行了一项有关生活方式的调查，调查相关信息见下表．请根据表格内容为校广播站写一篇80词左右的英文广播稿．
过去 现在
大部分学生骑车或步行上学，两餐之间不吃零食，运动很多 大约三分之一的学生由家长开车送到学校，很多学生吃肉太多，几乎不
锻炼
问题与希望 注意：
广播稿须包括表格中所有信息，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 表格中\"问题与希望\"一栏须用2﹣3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 广播稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数． Hello everyone!
The Health Club has just held a survey about the lifestyles of our students．Today we are going to share the results． Thank you!
【分析】这是一篇应用文体，给材料写作，根据相关信息写一篇广播稿，写作时要注意文体格式；写作的对象是我校学生的生活方式；写作的时态包括现在，过去和将来，包含的时态较多，尤其要注意；写作内容上，要包含表格的所有内容，同时要适当发挥；尽可能多用一些高级词汇，固定短语和高级句型，如：In the past，one third，are driven to school by their parents，too much，as fit as before，take part in，get fit等． 【解答】答案： Hello everyone!
The Health Club has just made a survey about the life styles of our students．Today we are going
自拟
to share the results．In the past，most of our students rode bikes or walked to school．They didn't eat any snacks between meals and they did a lot of sports．But now，about one third of our students are driven to school by their parents．Many students eat too much meat and seldom exercise．The problem is that more students are getting fat and they're not as fit as before．We hope more students can take part in after﹣school activities and get fit again． Thank you!
【点评】初中英语的作文特别是初一的作文，着重考查学生连词成句的能力，要在\"准\"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．对于中学作文的写作，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文．
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