一. 首先看一下高考阅卷老师如何评分。
阅卷老师看到作文。都要大概读一下，会在心中确立一个等级，一等是21分到25分，二等是16分到20分，三等是11分到15分......最要命的是，一旦老师心中确立了你的等级，就不愿意再更改了!也就是说，接下来细看你作文写得好坏，也只是在相应等级内变动了!
所以说，老师的一念之间，作文就会拉开等次!
这就要我们想尽一切办法给老师留下一等文的第一印象!这样，作文的分数，一般只是在相应等级内变动了。
二. 如何提升作文档次
1.简单的改用一些单词也会有意向不到的效果：如
用extraordinary代替very:十个人九个用very而你用extraordinary，那你不就与众不同了吗.
用significant代替important 用as a consequence代替as a result
用therefore代替so,举个例子，I got up early，therefore i was late. 写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous，humorous，interesting，smart，gentle，warm-hearted，hospital之类的形象词。 简单的替换一下，水平立刻显现出不一样了 2.善用连接词把短句改长句
如，一个句子+逗号+however+另一个句子，这里面however是没有实际意义的，就是表转折，但你可以用这招把两个简单句捏在一块啊!短句子成长句了! 都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and，但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
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如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：Not only the furcoat is soft，but it is also warm. ◆其他连接词：
表递进关系，用 \"furthermore”， \"what is more” 表转折：however/but 但是
表对比：not that …but that…不是…而是…/ one hand….on the other hand一方面…另一 方面…/ unlike…与…不同/not so much….as…与其…不如… 表目的：for the……….为了…
表因果：therefore因此，所有/ so 所以 表例证：for example 表假设：if 如果
表让步：although…虽然……(注意：后不可接but!虽然但是不可这样连用)/of course 当然…/clearly…显然… ◆ 相关过渡语
1)表示时间顺序： first， then， afterwards， meanwhile， later，first of all， finally， at last…
2)表示空间顺序： near， next to， far from， in front of， on the left， on one side…
3)表示比较、对照： like， unlike， such as， but， however， on the other hand， on the contrary， nevertheless， otherwise…
4)表示因果关系： because， for， as a result， therefore， thus… 5)表示递进关系： besides， what’s more， what was worse， moreover， furthermore， in addition， on top of… 6)表示并列关系： and， as well as， also…
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7)表示总结性： in general， in a word， in short， on the whole， to sum up， in brief， to conclude 3. 巧妙修改句式
举个例子，我不光唱歌，而且跳舞怎么说?i not onle sing ，but also dance，改动一下，not only do i sing，but also dance.倒装句!
I think that...... 宾语从句，老师批10张卷子看到8张里面有I think that不烦吗?如果一定要用宾语从句的话换一种说法：I have a thought that......别看只改动了一点，同位语从句!
同样I hear that谁都会用，不过同样谁都会用最好不要用!厉害一些的人会用：It is reported that......
牛人会用There is a piece of news that 同样的意思，但明显比I hear that要帅!
还有一种用并列巨额代替定语从句，不仅可以用来凑字数，还很醋。举个例子，我喜欢玩篮球，然后篮球有很多种特点，就可以把这些特点用定语从句的形式并列出来：I love basketball，which is......，which is......，which is....... 还有种用法叫后置定语有人感觉挺难吧，其实记住个例子就行了，穿着比基尼的女孩a girl who wears a bikini，变成a girls wearing a bikini就行了，这就是后置定语，很简单吧
最终的目的都是为了让作文与众不用，让阅卷老师眼前一亮! 三.高考英语作文写作时的注意事项
1.减少误拼
高考答题时，尽量别出现单词拼写错误，要是比较长的单词拼错了还好说，那种最简单的单词千万不要拼错!扣的不是一分的问题，有可能影响到等级。
2.注意卷面清爽，不要涂涂改改
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现在高考改卷，是把每一块分类用扫描仪扫描放到电脑里面。比如作文那一块，会被单独扫出来，放在电脑里以后，改卷的人看着投影仪上呈现出被放大了的段落，同时给出心里的分数，按下想给的分数。几个人的分数会根据系统判断，差别不大的话取平均值。差别大了，才会拉评分组组长来看。(依旧是被屏幕放大了的字)。所以，字写得好坏，一旦被放大，差别就不那么大了，最主要的是让改试卷的看得清爽，眼睛不累。同时注意的是，最好不要涂涂改改，不然看起来觉得很不舒服，很麻烦。只要注意卷面清爽，就可以了。
四：最后分享一些可替换使用的单词
1.occur 替换 think of
Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.
2.devote替换spend
He spends all his spare time in reading. → He devotes all his spare time to reading.
3.seek替换want / look for
They sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees.
4.average 替换ordinary
I’m an average ( ordinary ) student.
5.but替换very
The film we saw last night was very interesting. →
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→ The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting. The film we saw last night was anything but boring.
6.seat 替换sit
On his way to school， he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road， looking worried.
7.suppose 替换should
He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.
8.appreciate 替换thank
Thank you very much for you help. →
We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.
9.the case替换 true
I don’t think it is the case ( true ).
10.on替换as soon as
As soon as he arrived， he began his research. → On his arrival， he began his research..
11.due to替换because of
He arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm.
12.cover替换walk/read
After covering (walking) 10 miles， we all felt tired.
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13.contribute to替换 be helpful/useful
Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. → Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.
14.round the corner 替换 coming soon/ nearby
① The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans?
② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby).
15.come to light替换discover
The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels. → The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.
16.have a ball替换have a good time/ enjoy oneself
After visiting the workshop， we went back to school. Every one of us had a ball ( had a good time ).
17.come up with替换think of
Jack is very clever. He often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.
18.set aside替换save
Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.
19.be of + n. 替换adj.
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The products are of high quality (very good ) and are sold everywhere in China.
20.refer to 替换talk about/of， mention
The professor you referred to (talked about ) is very famous. 满分作文展示
一、假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format） 注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.
Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.
Yours, Li Hua
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二、假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括： 1．主题：环境保护； 2．展览时间；
3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com. 注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to. Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours Li Hua
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三、假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。 注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours, Li Hua
四、【作文题目】 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下： 1．栏目介绍。 2．稿件内容；
3．稿件长度：约400词汇 4．交稿日期：6月28日前 注意：
1．词数100左右；
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2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的； 3．开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures’’ section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours, Li Hua
译文： 彼得，你好！
我想让你为我们学校的英文报纸写篇文章。
我校报纸的“外国文化”专栏非常受学生的欢迎。专栏里刊登的是外国朋友写的有关他们国家文化的一些文章。你愿意写一些有关你在美国居住地区文化的东西吗？我们非常欢迎有关美国人怎样庆祝节假日和美国高中学生生活的文章。你可以写任何与之相关的有趣的和富有知识性的内容，400词就可以了。你能在6月28日之前交稿吗？ 我期待着收到你的来信。
此致 李华
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五、【作文题目】 假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括： 1．出发及返回时间；
2．活动：包饺子、表演节目等。 注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．.结语已为你写好。
Dear Lucy,
I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
译文：
露西，你好！
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我想邀请你下周六与我们一起去附近的敬老院过重阳节。在我们的文化中，重阳节是老人的节日。我们将去敬老院和老人们一起包饺子、做蛋糕。我们也将和他们一起唱歌、跳舞、玩游戏，度过一段快乐的时光。我们希望这些活动会让他们快乐。我们应该在下午四点左右返回。如果你能和我们一起去的话，请告诉我们，我们会在早上九点在校门口等你。 期待你的回复。
此致 李华
六、【作文题目】一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文。 1．家庭； 2．工作； 3．业余生活。 注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头语已为你写好。
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I’ll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I’ll do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I’ll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I’ll travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.
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七、【作文题目】假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：
李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985
到达：8月6日上午11:30 注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Peter, How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to theU.S.? Thank you in advance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
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八、【作文题目】假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括： 1. 外观(尺寸、颜色、材料) 2. 象征意义 3. 价格 注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头已为你写好。
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. InChina, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck.
People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!
Li Hua
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九、【作文题目】假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括：
1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力)
2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家) 3. 希望获准。 注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student fromChina. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'lI be able to tell students from other countries aboutChinaand learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply!
Regards, Li Hua
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Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a middle school student fromChina. I’ve learned on the Internet that your summer camp, which is going to be held inSingapore, is round the corner. I am really interested in it.
I, who am active and enjoy various activities, hope to take part in it very much. I know the ability of communication is of great importance and I can speak English quite fluently. In addition, in your camp, there are so many students from different countries. Therefore, I can communicate with the students from different parts of the world. Not only can I introduceChinato them, but I can know more about their countries as well. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Regards, Li Hua
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student fromChina. I have learnt the news on the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp inSingapore, which I am fond of for a long time. I have been looking forward to being able to not only tell the students from different countries something aboutChina, but learn about some other foreign countries as well. Besides, I am good at English in school, especially spoken English. Last year, I won the first prize in an English speech contest. I also hope to make some contributions to the friendship between countries. So I am eager to be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Regards,
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Li Hua
十、【作文题目】假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括： 1. 时间：周五晚8点至9点 2. 地点：学生俱乐部
3. 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 4. 要求：备小礼物 注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3. 答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。
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Hi, Susan,
We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday. We'd like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We'll gather at the Students' Club at 8 pm this Friday, after the evening classes. And it's going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we'll light the candles and sing \"Happy Birthday\" together for him. Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games. It'll be nice to see how excited he will be. I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party, too.
Yours, Li Hua
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Hi, Susan,
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We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday. I hope you can come and join us if it is convenient to you. The party will take place on Friday evening from 8 p.m. to 9 p.m. at the Students’ Club. During the party, we’ll sing “Happy Birthday” to him with the candles on. I am sure Xiaoming will be very happy and moved. After that, we’ll cut the birthday cake prepared for him in advance and share it together. What’s more, we decide to play some games afterwards. By the way, don’t forget to prepare a little gift when you come. I am sure we’ll enjoy ourselves together.
We are looking forward to your coming.
Yours, Li Hua
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Hi, Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday. I hope you can come and attend it from the bottom of my heart. The party will be held at the Students’ Club from 8 p. m. this Friday and it will last about one hour. Now that it is a surprise for Xiaoming, you’d better prepare a little gift when you come. The party will begin with a “Happy Birthday” song, wishing Xiaoming happy and healthy. When the song is over, we will enjoy the delicious birthday cake. Besides, we’ll play some games for pleasure. I am sure everybody will have a good time and regard it as an unforgettable experience.
Yours, Li Hua
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十一、【作文题目】假设你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信： 1．本人简介； 2．求助内容； 3．约定时间；
4．你的联系方式（Email：lihua@1236.com；phone：12345678）。 注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir / Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I'm writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: lihua@1236.com; 12345678. Look forward to your reply.
Yours Li Hua
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十二、【作文题目】假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括： 1．说明你是该报的忠实读者 2．赞赏该报优点： 1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事
3．提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章 注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头语己为你写好； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
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十三、【作文题目】假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。 英语演讲比赛 主题：人与自然
时间：6月15日下午2:00--5:00 地点：501教室 参赛选手：10名学生
联系人：李华（电话44876655） 欢迎大家光临
注意：词数100左右。
Dear Ms. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic \"Man and Nature\". We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions. I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes,
Li Hua
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十四、【作文题目】假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括： 1. 教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等 2. 授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）
3. 工作量：每周12学时，任选三门课；担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor） 注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。
Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing,BritainToday and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.
Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I’d be more than happy to help.
Best, Li Hua
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