考点 书面表达
一、提纲作文 (重庆卷·写作二)
青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中的“最好礼物”。她认为,礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力。
假设你是李华,请用英文发帖,内容应包括: ·赞同Susan的看法
·你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么 ·该礼物的意义 ·期待大家回复 注意:(1)词数不少于80; (2)符合语言规范; (3)在答题卡上作答;
(4)开头已给出(不计入总词数)。 I am a high school student from China. 【参考范文】
I am a high school student from China. Susan Beacham believes that the best present is the one which shows affection and takes great time and energy. I totally agree with her. In fact, it is not the present
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itself but our affection that matters.
The most unforgettable present I’ve ever received is a photo album. It looks quite ordinary, but to me, it is the most special one. It is from my best friend Mark, who went to Canada two years ago. It stands for our sincere friendship.
What about your opinion? Do you approve of me? Looking forward to your reply. (江西卷)
假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华,母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动,特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提纲准备一份英语发言稿。
1.学会学习:方法、习惯等; 2.学会做人:真诚、友善等; 3.其他方面:考生自拟。 注意:1.词数120个左右;
2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
______________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【参考范文】
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Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
In the coming three years, your school life will be challenging. Firstly, you should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class and review what had been taught after class. In addition, you should learn how to get along with others in school. I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. Finally, you should take part in sports and other outdoor activities frequently. They are very helpful to build up your body and enrich your school life.
No pains, no gains. I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here. Thank you! (陕西高考)
假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。 写作要点:
1.表示对客人的欢迎;
2.介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等);
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3.表达对客人的祝愿。 写作要求:
1.词数不少于100;
2.称呼已经给出,请写欢迎词正文; 3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 Dear American guests,
__________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear American guests,
On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.
As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on. The Show will begin at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.
I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you. (四川卷)
假设你是李夏,你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加高考的情况,请
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根据以下要点回信告知。 1.考试日期与科目; 2.考试准备情况; 3.考试时的状态; 4.对试题的感受; 5.可能的考试结果。 注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.开头语和结尾语已为你写好; 3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 4.文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇:高考college entrance examination Dear Sam,
Thank you for your concern.
__________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!
Yours, Li Xia
【参考范文】 Dear Sam,
Thank you for your concern. Let me share my thoughts and feelings about my college entrance examination. It is now a national policy that it
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is held on June 7 and 8 every year, during which, for me, Chinese, Maths, English, Politics, History and Geography are included.
Due to its great importance, every student in China would do his best to get ready for it, and I am no exception. I spent a whole year reviewing all the subjects carefully until I thought I was fully prepared. Eventually, the day came. I was nervous at first, but I quickly adapted myself to the best form I could have in years. Frankly speaking, the papers were not so hard for me despite a few minor setbacks. Consequently, I have every right to believe that my dream university is waving its hand at me. Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes!
Yours, Li Xia
（天津卷）
假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津,得知美国学生Chris作为交换生,下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示,给他写封邮件: (1)表示欢迎;
(2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等); (3)介绍本班情况;
(4)希望Chris做哪些事情,以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊。 注意:
(1)请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息;
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(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯; (3)词数不少于100;开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇: 交换生 exchange student Dear Chris,
I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.
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Yours, Li Jin
【参考范文】 Dear Chris,
I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.
I am glad to hear that you, as an exchange student, will come to our class to study next term. I would like to share some information with you.
What I want to tell you first is the climate here. It is pleasant, cool in summer and warm in winter. What’s more, there are a variety of special snacks, which I think will impress you deeply. In addition, the scenery here will also appeal to you.
Our class is like a big family, where we help each other in study and life. All the classmates are friendly and kind, so you don’t need to worry about the difficulty you will have getting along with them. In a word, you are welcome to our school. And I hope you can
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adapt to the new surroundings soon. You are also expected to tell us the culture about your country and help us improve our English. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours, Li Jin
(广东卷·基础写作)
你接受了一项写作任务,要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。 [写作内容]
请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道,内容包括: 人物:英国人理查德·阿维斯(Richard Avis) 出生日期:1974年12月1日
事件:2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日出生的人 目的:理解不同文化中成功人生的含义 相关信息: ·借助当地媒体寻找
·迄今找到32名,其中男性17名,女性15名,来自13个国家 ·职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等 ·计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日出生的人 ·打算根据此经历写一本书
*同年同月同日出生的人:time twin [写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
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[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。 【参考范文】
Richard Avis, a British born on December 1st, 1974, has commenced searching for the time twins worldwide since 2011.His purpose, with thought-provoking effect, is to have a better understanding of the true meaning of successful life in diverse cultures. Thanks to the local media, he had succeeded in finding 32 time twins from 13 different countries, with 17 males and 15 females. Those time twins are occupied with such various jobs such as government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers and artists. As for Richard’s plan, he intends to connect with 40 time twins before his 40-year-old birthday, so that he can accomplish a book based on this experience. (广东卷·读写任务)
阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other people’s clothes. As a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. Certainly nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi.
The money was in fact her life savings. She could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. She never learned
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to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation(捐助),and in 50 years she had been out of the South only once. The house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last uncle left her. Only after she became known in America did she begin to travel all over the country. Since then, she had been the subject of many interviews and articles and was even invited to the White House.
Her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. She herself left school in the sixth grade and had never married or had children. She said to the reporters that the idea of helping somebody’s child go to college gave her much pleasure. [写作内容]
1.用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2.用约120个词就Miss McCarty的捐助谈谈你的想法,内容包括: (1)你如何看待她的捐助行为;
(2)你认为她的捐助对受惠学生有哪些影响;
(3)如果你自己要捐助,你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由。 [写作要求]
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文的句子。
2.作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准]
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概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。 【参考范文】
Oseola McCarty, an ordinary worker with a thrifty lifestyle, donated a great deal of money to a university, which aroused public attention and earned her widespread social recognition. In return, she received a sense of satisfaction and fulfillment.
Virtuous and warm-hearted, the lady has donated a considerable amount of savings to help college students struggling with financial difficulties, thereby motivating people all over the world to participate in this kind activity.
From where I stand, not only will the lady’s generosity paint a very brilliant blue print for those students in need of money, but also it will build their faith in the future life.
Given the choice, I would make donations to those who still live under the bottom line of the modern living condition. The reasons are as follows. For one thing, generous and selfless contributions may take assistance to them, especially for the time when they are faced with pain and sorrow. For another, just as an old saying goes,“The rose’s in her hand; the flavor in mine.”That is to say, great satisfaction would step slowly and gracefully into the contributors’ souls as well. (新课标全国卷Ⅱ·写作)
一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要
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点和你的畅想完成短文。 1.家庭; 2.工作; 3.业余生活。 注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语已为你写好。
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
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I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely baby. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be richer and more colourful. (新课标全国卷Ⅰ·写作)
假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)
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注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇:住宿—accommodation。 【参考范文】 Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本文属于应用文中的书信,李华写信给英国的一个培训中心询问暑假培训的详细内容。使用第一人称和将来时为主的时态。
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要点:1.你计划去英国学习英语;2.看见了对方的广告,引起你的注意,想询问具体信息。3.该校培训班的开始日期,班级规模,周课时,费用以及食宿方式。4.期待对方的回信。
写作时要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要富有变化,多注意灵活使用定语从句,包括非限制性定语从句等高级句式。
二、图画作文/漫画作文
(辽宁卷·写作)
假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活·创意无限”(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示,以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知。
注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3.开头及结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 校园campus 创意作品innovation 颁奖prize-giving
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Notice
An exciting event“Innovations on Campus”is around the corner. __________________________________________________________________
Student Union 【参考范文】 Notice
An exciting event“Innovations on Campus”is around the corner. Everyone of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.
Note that your innovations must be school things. Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.
All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym. Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure! It’ll be held from 15:00 to 17:00 on June 18.So don’t miss the chance of being the winner. Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success. For any questions, call Li Hua at 44876655.
Come on, everybody! It’s your show time. Student Union (北京卷·写作)
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文,记述你和同学们向学校提建议,
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解决自行车存放问题的过程。
注意:1.词数不少于60。
2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. 【参考范文】
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy for us to park our bikes there.
三、（半）开放作文 (重庆卷·写作一)
请结合材料,按要求用英文写作。
“My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry.” 要求:(1)就此材料发表你的看法;
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(2)紧扣材料,有明确的观点; (3)词数不少于60; (4)在答题卡上作答。
【参考范文】
Nowadays we youngsters spend too much time on our phones and there is too little time for our friends.
Indeed, the phone can bring great convenience to our life. However, it can be harmful to our friendship. If we pay no attention to our friends like this, our relationship will, definitely, become worse and worse. In my opinion, we should value our friends instead of phones in our real life. Do bear in mind: The mobile phone is just a tool. (福建卷·写作)
如何理解“成功”,不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation),按要求用英语写一篇短文。
“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.” —Sir Winston, Churchill 内容要求:
1.你对该引语的理解; 2.你的相关经历; 3.恰当的结尾。 注意:
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1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息; 3.词数:120左右。
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that
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This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn’t get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.
At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better. Looking back, I feel had I lost heart I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike.
Actually, we can’t succeed in everything we try. What’s important is that we should stick at it. (湖南卷)
Section C(25 marks)
Directions: Write an English composition according to the
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instructions given below.
学校正在组织科技创新大赛,你想为日常生活中某件物品(如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My Magic ”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你的创意。 内容:1.说明设计理由; 2.介绍新功能。
注意:1.词数不少于120个; 2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 【参考范文】 My Magic Water Bottle
My magic water bottle will be a replacement of the traditional one which can change the temperature of the inside water automatically according to the changes of the outer environment.
There are certain factors I take into account on my new invention. For one thing, traditional water bottle makes it inconvenient for travelers to have a comfortable drink anytime and anywhere. For another, drinking too cold or too hot water does nothing but harm to our health, so my magic water bottle can serve as an assistant or a doctor.
The new functions will win my magic water bottle enormous love and popularity. On the one hand, the automatic temperature-controlling system mentioned above can adjust the water temperature. On the other hand, we can set a desirable temperature for the inside water, and
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what surprises us most is that the water can remain at that temperature for about twenty hours. (湖北卷·写作)
请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇短文。
Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society. 注意:①无须写标题; ②除诗歌外,文体不限;
③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例; ④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
⑤词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。
【参考范文】
It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society. I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.
As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.
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(浙江卷·写作)
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。 注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。 Dear Mr.Wang,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
One possible student version: Dear Mr.Wang,
Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.
What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.
In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through
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fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
(江苏卷·写作)
81.请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
When we read newspapers, we often come across such English words as“AIDS”and“PK.”When we watch TV, we frequently hear words like“NBA”or“PM 2.5.”When we speak, we automatically use words like“OUT”or“Bye-bye.”English words and expressions like these are getting popular. They have already become part of our daily language. And 239 English words have been included in the latest Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese.
The inclusion has started a heated discussion. A group of scholars signed a letter of complaint over the inclusion of these English words, which, they think, goes against Chinese language policies. They not only worry that Chinese is borrowing an increasing number of English words but are also concerned that the inclusion may hurt the dignity of the Chinese language. However, others are in favor of the inclusion because it is hard to say whether it will threaten the Chinese language. They believe the selection is mostly a result of their function and use in daily
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life.
【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;
2.用约120个单词发表你的观点,内容包括: (1)支持或反对汉语词典收录英语词汇; (2)用2- 3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。 【写作要求】
1.可以支持文中任一观点,但必须提供理由或论据; 2.阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句; 3.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称; 4.不必写标题。 【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
【参考范文】
Although some common expressions of English have been integrated into our daily life, their recent inclusion into our dictionary still stirs a massive debate among scholars, some positive while others negative.
Personally, I strongly support this practice for two reasons. I believe it will have a positive influence on Chinese education. This is because China is quickly becoming a super power of the world and what is most important is that it will hasten the learning process of language students.
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Exposure to the English language which is used in our daily life can make people familiar with them. What’s more, English has also borrowed words from other languages and I don’t see why Chinese can’t do so. Last but not least, this is for the benefit of increased interaction and understanding among all the peoples.
It therefore seems natural to add these new expressions to the language as western culture and Chinese culture continue to merge through the increased contact and diversification of societies. (安徽卷·写作)
为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下: 1.表示理解并给予安慰; 2.提出建议并说明理由。 注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:temper n.脾气,情绪 Hi Worried,
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I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.
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Yours, Jamie
【参考范文】 Hi Worried,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips.
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours, Jamie
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某英文报社组织主题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动,你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文,内容须包括:1.该谚语的含义;2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。 ①A friend in need is a friend indeed. ②Where there’s a will, there’s a way. 注意:1.词数:120~150个;
2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇:谚语proverb
题干中给出的两句谚语“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”“Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”都是中学生耳熟能详的,考生在审题时不会有障碍。两句谚语所蕴含的道理浅显易懂,贴近考生生活和经验,能够保证考生有话可说,利于考生展现其语言运用能力。题干中给出两句谚语,给考生一定的选择空间,这样做既不会增加考生审题的负担,也有利于避免考生因不熟悉谚语而无话可说的情况出现。考生首先要了解两句谚语的基本意思,然后要将“说明+记叙+议论”结合起来,衔接自然,有理有据,充分考查了学生的知识素养,思维能力及英语表达能力。
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Where there’s a will, there’s a way
My favorite proverb is“Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”,which means we will be able to get over all kinds of challenges if we can stick to
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our dreams and never give up.
Memories rushed to my mind when I saw this topic when I was in high school I had great enthusiasm for English and intended to take part in an English speech contest. However, when preparing for it, I found it very challenging to collect information and use language correctly. I was about to give up when my Dad noticed and offered this proverb to me. Encouraged by it, I spared no effort to solve every problem with confidence. If it hadn’t helped me, I couldn’t have won the prize finally. In a word, not only does the proverb enable me to face up to the difficulties bravely, but also it contributes much to keeping confident all the time. Therefore, keep in mind—where there’s a will, there’s a way. Success comes to those who never give up.
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