姓名：谢同学
学校：重庆市第十一中学校
分数：98
Alongwiththeadvanceofsociety,ourenvironmenthasbeenseverelypolluted,withtheskyfullofhazeanddust.Forthetimebeing,asweknow,globalwarmingandincreasingpopulationarethemostseriousproblem,whichmaycauseahorriblecatastrophe.Ourhome,theearth,issufferingfromtheenergyshortageandtheexhaustionofnaturalresources.Consequently,itisourresponsibilitytorescueourplanetassoonaspossible.AsfarasIamconcerned,ontheonehand,Iamrequiringmyselfnottodroplittereverywhereinordertokeepourlivingsurroundingscleanandcomfortable.Ontheotherhand,Igotoschoolbybusinsteadoftakingacar.Apparently,wearesupposedtostartfromlittlethingsinourdailylife.Tosumup,itishightimethatweputgreatemphasisontheenvironmentalprotection.Frommypointofview,firstofall,thegovernmentshouldbansmokinginpublicandabusingplasticbagsatonce.What'smore,whatweshoulddoistoformahabitofsavingwaterandotherresources,otherwise,wewillrunintounexpectedtroubleinthecomingfuture.Lastbutnotleast,Iholdafirmbeliefthataslongaswesparenoeffortstoprotectourearthfromterribledamage,everybodywillliveawonderfullifeinthebeautifulplacethatwealllongfor.【评语】
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